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This is where I will periodically add chapters of my latest fanfiction, Initial D: Itsuki Stage.

To set the stage, no pun intended, the storyline will take place during the off-time where Itsuki is in the hospital after his brush with Shingo. We are going to explore what happened to Saori afterwards. We are going to see Itsuki finally take matters into his own hands instead of blubbering about the one that got away. There will be explosions and fistfights. There will be a Battle Stage where we take a moment to count the bodies.

Takeuchi Itsuki's dopey demeanor is but a mask to hide his true nature: the legendary badass of Akina.

Chapter 1 is coming very soon, as in, before the end of tomorrow (10/4/2014). I had some incidents today that kept me away from the keyboard for most of the day, so I'm writing it tonight.

Oh my...

*Waits in anticipation*

Oh i am so in..

I'm in.

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Here's chapter one.
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"Take care, Itsuki." Takumi shuffled out of the room, Natsuki giving a cheeky wave as she followed. The room became quiet once more. Takeuchi Itsuki, 18, sighed in exasperation at the loneliness that pervaded the air around his increasingly uncomfortable hospital bed. A frumpy bed, however, was the least of his concerns. The whole reason for his being there was due to an accident that was in no way his fault. He was angered at the guy that hit his car, and at his former girlfriend for skipping out on him afterwards.

He was glad, however, that the hospital staff was cooperative with him in supporting this ruse. Money had a tendency to change a person's mind about things.

Now that the pesky civilian "friends" were out of the room, he could get to work. Quickly pulling the cast and bandages off, he pulled out a laptop and began breaking into the hospital's digital records archive. He needed to know more about Saori. Something was amiss. Saori appeared out of nowhere as an acquaintance of Natsuki's less than a week ago, yet nobody had ever heard of her before. Multiple background checks came up fruitless. Itsuki undertook the task of getting close to her due to a suspicion that there was more to her than she was letting on. "There's nothing here showing that she was checked in at all." Itsuki mused, "It's like she disappeared as soon as she set foot in the building." There were a few entries listed at around the same time as his own admittance, though. Perhaps she used a fake name. Itsuki jotted down the names and room numbers, and dressed himself. Walking around in a patient gown would attract unwanted attention. He was tying his shoes when there was a knock at the door to his room. "Itsuki?" A shrill, muffled female voice caught him by surprise. It was her. The handle turned, and the door creaked open.

Itsuki dove into a combat stance, drew his pistol, and aimed squarely at Saori's forehead. "You picked a bad fucking time to come back, you bitch."

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I don't hear the screams anymore.

Short but...holy heck that is very intense for a start.

well that was an interesting start, don't know why but Itsuki with a gun sounds....horrifying.. nice job Tessou.

Damn, this is like,


I HAVE NO WORDS.

THAT IS HOW AWESOME THIS IS.

Can't believe i read something like this in front of my eye...

I WANT MOAR

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This is gonna be exactly as awesome as I expected.

We demand more.

You know it's great when Tessou is the man behind the fanfic.

MOAR PLZ.

More coming very soon. Unfortunately I have work today so I can't write much until I get back.

This is definitely interesting. I'm looking forward to more. Although I have a very hard time imagining Itsuki more than a bumbling idiot.

Which just makes it the perfect cover.

Genius incorporating in the ID Universe. As a lot of us are really interested on the stories of the other characters which shigeno just kinda shrugged off, its an entertaining read.

Sorry that updates have been slow. I caught a flu or heavy cold of some sort yesterday and it's been keeping me bedridden most of the day. I'm on the PC for short bursts to check email and stuff, but there's been no writing time.

Tessou are you ok do you have ebola

Nah, I'm at the tail end of some sort of flu that's been going around. I am constantly tired and cranky, and I wouldn't want that attitude bleeding into the writing.

I do have an outline for the next few chapters and have been chipping at it whenever I have a few minutes out of the room, though. Chapter 2 is coming, and it will be a lot longer. I made the first chapter short to gauge initial reader response and see if it was worth continuing on the same path, or if I should make some changes.

Get well soon then, we will be waiting for the next chapter

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This project is cancelled.