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> [FANFIC] Demon, Chapter 2
dark_hero_zero
  Posted: Dec 18 2006, 04:49 PM


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Chapter 1: Tale of the Nine Demons

A long time ago, in the place we now call Tokyo. Nine Demons ruled over the land. The humans were enslaved and eaten if not obeyed by them. All hope was lost, until one of the demons decided to retaliate. He fought back with all his might, but was losing since he was only one demon. The other demons laughed and decided to make deal with him only because the amount of humans to eat was dissolving. They showed him Mt Fuji and the bay declaring a race. If he were to lose, his power would come to them and he would be turned into a human, but if he won, the humans would be set free for a thousand years till their return. Seeing as he was losing the war, he gladly accepted. During the race, the humans cast a barrier on the 8 demons to stop them in their tracks. The demons yelled, but one of them cast a spell of his own on the hero demon before he crossed the finish line. He managed to cross, but was quickly turned into a necklace after. This tale was soon forgotten, but it’s been a thousand years since and the demons are awakening. The time has come for the hero to rise and save us once again.

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“Mr. Tanaka would you so kindly WAKE UP!!!!!!!!” The teacher known as Mr. Kogi slammed the desk hard, which in fact woke me up and made me fall. Hi, my name is Sho Tanaka and this is my senior year in Holy-Force high school. What can I say about this school? It’s as boring as watching grass grow, wait actually watching grass grow would be a lot more fun. All the teachers are normal ones who just get you through and not make life interesting as suppose to the teacher in a manga called GTO. Yes, everything here is normal which pretty much amounts to boring in my books. “Mr. Tanaka go to the principal’s office immediately!” The teacher shouted so much, his toupee almost fell off. I immediately ran for the exit hoping to escape his whining when I suddenly bump into Sakura who was holding a bunch of papers.

“Sakura, I’m so sorry.” She didn’t crouch down to get them.

“Sorry doesn’t cut it! You better pick up all these papers before Mr. Tiny gets mad me because if he does, it’s going to be your head.” She looked at me with truth in her eyes about these papers belonging to Mr. Tiny. I quickly grabbed and handed them over to her in about six seconds. She smirked at me and left on her way. My girlfriend can be such a pain sometimes. Then the bell to go home sounded off. With that bell came a bunch of students trying to pack and go home. In minutes I was squashed to the floor with the smell of old and new shoes in my nostrils creeping up. A hand quickly pulled me up from the floor in the nick of time from another shoe squash. It was my rival Kenta.

“I don’t want you dead by just a couple of people stepping all over you. When you die, it’s going to be by me.” As fast as a ninja he was sucked into the crowd gone. I looked over my shoulder about three seconds and shortly the crowd was gone. I was left alone in the hall except for paper on the ground gliding.

“How is it going Sho?” A huge hand pulled over my shoulder. My reaction was to sweat and shake like a frightened dog. The hand was connected to none other than Mr. Tiny. Mr. Tiny is a straight forward guy……..actually not really. His record showed that he was at a rehab not long ago for saying he was being mind controlled, but since he’s been at this school, he’s been very nice. Never listens to orders except from his ex-wife Ms. Luna, who happens to be the principal and gives easy A’s in his class. Even though, rumors has been spreading around that he killed the janitor, but I believe the janitor was just fired.

“Fine Mr. Tiny. I was just about to leave.” To the front door I ran quickly out into the daylight. Waiting for me as usual was Sakura. The smile on her face meant that something was up her sleeve, but after careful planning I was ready for anything.

“Don’t you know what day it is?” The smile not leaving her face.

“Nope,” I joked. She quickly smacked me with light punches until I remembered. “Yeah I know, today is when we take my dads S30 and do some illegal street racing.” Sakura cheered and skipped out to the front gate. My girlfriend is a car fanatic ever since watching that anime about cars and some guy who would always win. About the same time she looked at my dads blue S30 with eagerness to drift it. My dad has done some illegal street racing when he was young and his S30 was tuned to perfection. On the way home, Sakura just kept on talking about cars and how to perform a perfect drift. Nothing would get her off cars. She waved a quick goodbye and ran to her house, finally some peace and quite. As I went up to my house, I couldn’t help, but stare at the S30. That car looked so good, that sometimes I wonder why no one has tried to steal it. Beside the front door was my dad smoking a cigarette. Stupid old man thinks smoking is going to help him get over mom dying, but he’s just wasting his time. “Hey dad, I’m taking the car tonight alright.”

“Go ahead, but wear this.” He showed me mom’s prized necklace. “It will give you good luck.” I examined it closely and put it on. “Better change your clothes though because that doesn’t go with your school uniform.” He chuckled and coughed a bit. I hate him for being so serious at times and then swiftly switching to funny. He’s weird, but he’s my dad…….or maybe I’m adopted. Time went by and soon my girlfriend and I were on the C1 outbound in Tokyo.

“Alright, hit it!” shouted Sakura beside me. I slammed the gas hard making our heads hit the seat. The S30’s engines roared so loud, I could feel something in me. It kept saying faster, faster, and faster! My heart pounded rapidly and everything went into auto pilot. Before I even noticed what I was doing, truck, cars and the walls rapidly whooshed past us in a blink of eye. Corners came up and without a thought I steered a hard left making a perfect drift through one car in the inside.

“WOW!!!! Your really good Sho, have you been practicing?” I looked at her and her delight of the speed. She is such a weird girl. Then I heard another engine roar coming from behind. Looking at the mirror was no help because of my lack of knowledge of cars, but I could read the sticker in the hood clearly. It read Reborn God.

“It’s a white FD! Don’t let it pass you.” I heard Sakura loud and clear, but it was obvious that I wasn’t going to let it pass me. The more I heard the engine roar of that FD, the clearer to me that this was a street race. Shifting to fourth gear, We headed out into the streets of Tokyo.
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Posted: Dec 18 2006, 06:53 PM


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this is coo but wat about your other fan fic
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Posted: Dec 18 2006, 10:09 PM


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Keep it up.
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  Posted: Dec 28 2006, 01:28 PM


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After some thinking, I decided to leave Initial D's past up to the creator. So I made another fanfic instead, enjoy.

This post has been edited by dark_hero_zero on Dec 28 2006, 01:28 PM
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I think im going to like this one. Keep up the good work. smile.gif
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  Posted: Jan 3 2007, 09:45 PM


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Chapter 2: A Demons Whisper

The utter noise of the FD’s engine crept closer to my ear as it reached my bumper. Looking at the mirror, I was able to block its path for now. Taking my gaze onto the street, another corner was coming up. Shifting to third, I braked and turned the wheel left. The FD’s engine roared louder and I looked back to see it. It came closer to my car, almost touching.

“Look out!!! He’s coming in too fast!” shouted Sakura. I tried to steer away from the car, but instead the car span-out. Closing my eyes the only things I could hear were the tire’s screech and Sakura’s scream. Then I felt a jolt on the back and hear a cracking sound. Finally the G-force stopped and I opened my eyes. Still darkness was seen. Then I could hear voices out in the background. Suddenly a cold metal brushed upon my neck.

“Why don’t we just kill him right here and now?”

“That would be the most unsatisfying revenge that I ever tasted.”

“That’s true. Alright we’ll play with him a bit longer.”

“For know we’ll use the girl as bait to force him into our revenge. He will lose his woman and his dignity. The same way we lost ours, a race.” Footsteps soon came forward to my position. The breathing of a mouth came closer to my ear. “Get ready.” Then I awoke to see that I was still in the S30. Looking over to the passenger seat, Sakura was still their, she was sleeping.

“Hey kid, are you okay?” I looked at a police holding out his hand. Then I was taken to the police station, where my dad was in an uproar. He came up to me and whacked me in the head hard.

“Let’s go home.” I nudged Sakura to wake up, but she didn’t move.

“Hey Sakura wake up.” No response.

“Sakura wake up!” No response.

“Sakura!” I felt something heavy form in the bottom of my gut.

“What is it kid?” All the police looked at Sakura and her unconscious body. They shook her up, but she didn’t wake up.

“The only way to wake her up is to race me.” I looked to see a grinning purple horn child. “I’ll be back, but in human form just to make it your defeat tasty. Make sure you’re prepared for defeat.” He laughed out loud and disappeared. Soon I was surrounded by tears and sirens of the hospital. Sakura’s parents yelled at me and were going to sue me, but my dad said he would take good care of me. Looking at the necklace, I whispered.

“Some good luck you are.” I didn’t want to know it, but I have a bad feeling things are about to get worse.
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A few days later, things didn’t cool down. First I had to work hard to repair the S30’s bumper. Second was the fine for street racing in Tokyo. Finally, my dad and Sakura’s parents are punishing me. Dad won’t let me sleep in my own room without rent and the parents put a restriction order on them and Sakura. I take class normally, but I’m always too tired that I sleep. Also people have been avoiding me because of the rumor that I’m cursed by some evil power. The only one that talks to me is my rival Kenta (who taunts me) and Mr. Tiny. I’m in hell.

“It isn’t that bad. It could be worse.” Mr. Tiny was eating some tofu he bought. I gazed below watching cars pass by while we were on the school roof.

“You know, I have a feeling things are going to get worse.” I was absolutely right.

“Hello there, I’m from the occult club and I’d like to ask some questions.” I turned around to see a pink haired, red-eyed schoolgirl.

“Say what?”

“My name is Ayako Yuui and would you be so kind to answer some questions?”

“Sure, I guess.”

“Okay, first is it true that demons are ruining your life?” I started to shake.

“How did you know?”

“With these contact lenses I can see them.”

“No, that they were chasing me.”

“Well rumors have been going around about you being cursed by evil spirits ad I felt it was my duty to investigate.” She smiled and then wrote down a check on her notepad.“Question two, was Sakura Konawa abducted by the demons?” Thinking about her made me pause for a sec.

“She was.” Ayako wrote another check on the notepad and smiled.

“Alright, it’s decided.”

“What’s decided?”

“I’m going to help you get back Ms. Konawa from the demons.”

“Say wait a…..”

“On to the occult room!” Without a word, I was dragged into the occult room and world.