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Posted: Apr 3 2007, 08:54 AM
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Initial D: Shuto’s ex-hero
Disclaimer: I don’t own Initial D, Shuto Kousoku Trial series and all the vehicles.
This is base on Shuto Kousuko Trial 5 and after but sorry guys. New cars comes in.
FYI, The version here is going to be more detail than the fanfic one bcoz fanfic has to many strict rules.
Chapter 1: Meeting an old friend
After Miyajima crashed and entered the ambulance. His girl friend cried for him on Yusuke chest but she didn’t know that Miyajima was alive.
10 days later, at Saitama.
Miyajima went to a newspaper stall and bought a car magazine. He stayed in a hotel and read the magazine he bought. He turned the pages until he saw D1GP a famous drifting event in Japan. He mind suddenly flew thinking the past when he was talking about drifting with a long lost friend.
â€śHmm, maybe he knows me. I have never seen him after high school; I hope he is in still in Akina,â€ť
Miyajima takes a bus and goes to Akina. The bus stopped at Akina. He went down and looks for his long lost friend. Before searching his friend, he went and put his bags in a cheap hotel. Money isn’t a problem for him because he was rich. He went everywhere to search his long lost friend. Hours have past, Miyajima was tired and he walked until he reached the G.S. Petrol Station. He went in to buy some drinks to quench his thirst; he paid to Youichi and went off. Later he heard Itsuki shouting.
â€śIketani-sempai have you heard that Nissan will stop making R34’s,â€ť
Miyajima was in shocked; he went to Iketani and asked a question.
â€śExcuse me, are you Kouichirou Iketani?â€ť (Miyajima)
Iketani replied â€śYes, I am Kouichirou Iketâ€¦ Wait a sec, Miyajima is that you?â€ť
â€śYes, it’s a long time friend,â€ť said Miyajima.
â€śI heard from Kenji that you have lost the Shuto Expressway title?â€ť asked Iketani.
â€śYes I know and it’s a long story,â€ť said Miyajima tiredly.
â€śNever mind, tonight I will meet you at Family’s Diner our old school regular place with Kenji our buddy and two of my juniors Takumi and Itsuki,â€ť (Iketani)
9 p.m. at Family’s Diner.
Iketani, Kenji, Takumi and Itsuki came to Family’s Diner. All of them came with their own cars. Miyajima meet Iketani and Kenji. They all hug together and acted like teenagers even though they are already 22 years old. Later, Iketani came to Miyajima and introduce to Miyajima, Takumi and Itsuki.
â€śThis is Takumi, one of my juniors and he is one of Akina’s famous Drifters. This guy is Itsuki also my junior in everything.â€ť
â€śNice to meet you both,â€ť (Miyajima)
Miyajima shake hands with Itsuki and later Takumi until he feels a strange aura.
â€śThat Aura,â€ť As Miyajima’s minds speaks. Takumi also feels Miyajima's aura but his aura is different than any racer he met before.
â€śSo how did you lose the title?â€ť Ask Iketani and Kenji.
â€śWell it all beganâ€¦.â€ť
Miyajima told everything what happen in Shuto Expressway.
â€śOh so that was it. She lied to you and she used Yusuke to defeat you at Shuto Expressway. That girl is a bxxch,â€ť Said Iketani angrily.
â€śAnyway I am here just to turn a new leaf so are you free Iketani and Kenji,â€ť
â€śWhyâ€ť asked Iketani and Kenji.
â€śI want to buy a new car and race in the mountain,â€ť Said Miyajima with new hopes.
â€śSure, great and you can join our racing team.â€ť
â€śRacing team? What racing team?â€ť
â€śThe Akina Speed Stars of course, and tonight we have our gathering at 10.30 come and join us.â€ť
â€śSureâ€ť replied Miyajima.
They all headed to Mount Akina and watched as newbie’s from Akina Speed Stars were drifting on the mountain. Miyajima looked at the newbie drifting, he know their skills are bad. He went to Iketani and asked.
â€śMay I borrow your car?â€ť
â€śSure but remember to bring back in one piece,â€ť replied Iketani as he laughed
â€śHey Miyajima since I worried that you would a dent to my precious S13, I will sit in the car and watch you drive,â€ť
Miyajima entered Iketani’s S13 starts the engine, Iketani went in and put his seat belts on. As Iketani seats in his car he feels an aura of Miyajima that he has never felt before even Takumi’s aura was different. Is this an aura of an ex-highway racer or a racer learning something different?
END OF CHAPTER 1
This post has been edited by aiman15 on Apr 3 2007, 08:57 AM
Posted: Apr 3 2007, 09:10 AM
Were you expecting something else?
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Plot has potential. But I advise that you re-read your chapter once.
*adds to the fanfic thread*
Posted: Apr 3 2007, 11:15 AM
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there indeed is potential, but as Meteor said, pay more attention to the grammar, and if you know someone who is good at proofreading, let him/her read it and see if there's something to fix. keep it up!