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Rudy | Posted: Jun 13 2006, 01:20 PM |
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eighty_D | Posted: Jun 13 2006, 01:36 PM |
lv.23 lurker Group: Advanced Members Posts: 1,107 Member No.: 15,593 Joined: Jan 26th 2006 Location: Fairbanks, AK | Nice Job Dori, I really enjoyed the read. You should put in some dashes or something to seperate the perspectives? though I first thought the second Paragraph was an observation of Takumi's. |
Kurei | Posted: Jun 13 2006, 01:41 PM |
The Driving Specialist. Group: Advanced Members Posts: 1,429 Member No.: 15,603 Joined: Jan 26th 2006 Location: Michigan | Not bad |
BOZZ | Posted: Jun 13 2006, 01:52 PM |
IDW Posts A Freaking LOT Member Group: Advanced Members Posts: 28,412 Member No.: 1,414 Joined: Mar 9th 2004 Location: Update Profile | Nice fanfic... It is surprisingly not filled with what you expect out of an Initial D fanfic... |
Rudy | Posted: Jun 13 2006, 03:48 PM |
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Dave Rodgers | Posted: Jun 13 2006, 04:32 PM |
Man who stand on toilet high on pot. Group: Advanced Members Posts: 2,930 Member No.: 10,501 Joined: Jul 22nd 2005 Location: Neo-New York City | For some reason I'm reminded of Capeta more than Initial D, but that's cool in my books. |
Blain | Posted: Jun 13 2006, 08:22 PM |
IDW God Member Group: Members Posts: 173 Member No.: 16,516 Joined: Mar 9th 2006 Location: Moses Lake | Dude thats like wow....just wow. AWSOME!. |
Rudy | Posted: Jun 14 2006, 06:08 PM |
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WRX | Posted: Jun 14 2006, 06:27 PM |
IDW Racer Group: Advanced Members Posts: 3,811 Member No.: 5,563 Joined: Feb 19th 2005 Location: Baytown, Texas | gah! I give up on reading lol, but nice story there XD |
eighty_D | Posted: Jun 14 2006, 06:28 PM |
lv.23 lurker Group: Advanced Members Posts: 1,107 Member No.: 15,593 Joined: Jan 26th 2006 Location: Fairbanks, AK | Nice, I knew it was a Starion because you like 80's imports FR and the low redline, had to be the 2.6 . |
Rudy | Posted: Jun 14 2006, 06:39 PM |
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Hannah | Posted: Jun 14 2006, 07:27 PM |
Remember Me Group: PONY FANATIC Posts: 2,243 Member No.: 8,296 Joined: Jun 19th 2005 Location: Update Profile | holy crap *swoon* I wanna drive Akiyuki's car now!!! |
?wha? | Posted: Jun 14 2006, 08:00 PM |
In sexy black'n gold :D Group: Advanced Members Posts: 2,254 Member No.: 5,914 Joined: Mar 2nd 2005 Location: Sydney Australia | if i could FIND a starion to buy here than i would drive one.... |
VTiRoj | Posted: Jun 15 2006, 01:33 AM |
IDW's neighbourhood Roj Group: Advanced Members Posts: 1,973 Member No.: 15,576 Joined: Jan 25th 2006 Location: England | Holy crap... that story is insane! In a good way of course.# I say you send that to S.S and ask for an opinion, that story would make a great episode. |
eighty_D | Posted: Jun 15 2006, 02:27 AM |
lv.23 lurker Group: Advanced Members Posts: 1,107 Member No.: 15,593 Joined: Jan 26th 2006 Location: Fairbanks, AK | I'm curious to what kind of "unorthodox" tuning is under the hood. This post has been edited by eighty_D on Jun 15 2006, 02:44 PM |
EA11R | Posted: Jun 15 2006, 02:19 PM |
coffee break anyone? Group: Advanced Members Posts: 508 Member No.: 15,978 Joined: Feb 17th 2006 Location: Palmdale, CA | nice fanfic! |
Rudy | Posted: Jun 15 2006, 08:00 PM |
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caos950042 | Posted: Jun 17 2006, 06:10 AM | ||
~A grunt in the Game called Life~ Group: Advanced Members Posts: 616 Member No.: 14,415 Joined: Nov 14th 2005 Location: Update Profile |
sounds like a ricer, but that's what I think. | ||
Fong | Posted: Jun 17 2006, 02:28 PM |
IDW Regular Member Group: Members Posts: 231 Member No.: 4,360 Joined: Nov 19th 2004 Location: Christchurch, New Zealand | man, he looks like a BADASS. I'm really digging this fan fic. |
Rudy | Posted: Jun 20 2006, 12:06 PM |
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thrett | Posted: Jun 20 2006, 02:25 PM |
IDW God Member Group: Members Posts: 178 Member No.: 18,478 Joined: Jun 19th 2006 Location: Lomita | keeop it coming homie |
Renzeiken | Posted: Jun 21 2006, 01:36 AM |
IDW Senior Member Group: Members Posts: 89 Member No.: 18,032 Joined: May 27th 2006 Location: Alabang, Philippines | Some sentences sound awkward, but other than that this is a whole lot better than the fics i've read on FF.net. I'm impressed with the technical detail you've put into the fic, just make sure not to go overboard with the techie stuff or that'll lead to your downfall. Kudos to you pal This post has been edited by Renzeiken on Jun 21 2006, 01:39 AM |
caos950042 | Posted: Jun 21 2006, 01:37 AM | ||
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And I do to. This post has been edited by caos950042 on Jun 21 2006, 01:38 AM | ||
Rudy | Posted: Jun 21 2006, 09:27 PM |
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caos950042 | Posted: Jun 22 2006, 02:04 AM | ||
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That's a bit too late. | ||
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