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wing_0 | Posted: May 14 2012, 01:22 PM |
IDW Expert Member Group: Members Posts: 126 Member No.: 24,095 Joined: Apr 21st 2007 Location: That Poland place | Truly great comeback, very intense and complete chapter, I really enjoyed reading it . Though taking into account the time gap I guess I won't be able to avoid rereading the whole fic from the beginning. |
Meteor | Posted: May 14 2012, 01:42 PM |
Were you expecting something else? Group: Advanced Members Posts: 3,921 Member No.: 20,929 Joined: Oct 14th 2006 Location: Some place in South-East Asia | ^Speaking of which, I should get around to rereading the middle parts as well. Also, welcome back wing_0. P.S: Demon Boost, There was a typo I missed. I edited it into the last post shortly after you'd already made your edits so it's still there in the chapter. Could've pointed it out sooner I guess, but anyway, now I've pointed it out. |
Rudy | Posted: Nov 22 2014, 08:08 PM |
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Hannah | Posted: Nov 22 2014, 08:43 PM |
Remember Me Group: PONY FANATIC Posts: 2,243 Member No.: 8,296 Joined: Jun 19th 2005 Location: Update Profile | >tmw read this chapter >the feels > feels intensifies >sobbing uncontrollably Damn did you really have to make this chapter so emotional? Not like it's poorly written -- far from it. I felt like everyones emotions were being channeled through me. UGH THE FEELS for everyones sake please write more frequently. 10/10 would recommend |
Tuskano | Posted: Nov 22 2014, 10:41 PM | ||
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wing_0 | Posted: Dec 2 2014, 12:08 PM |
IDW Expert Member Group: Members Posts: 126 Member No.: 24,095 Joined: Apr 21st 2007 Location: That Poland place | Great revival! I especially liked the pacing of the end section and the flashbacks after Takumi leaves for the hospital, that was very dynamic and engaging Keep it up! |
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