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> [FANFIC] The Takahashi Brothers, A fanfic with my OC
shadow55419
Posted: Feb 4 2013, 04:39 AM


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QUOTE (s12drifter @ 5 minutes, 10 seconds ago)
i would have imagined the farreri had a unfair advantage simply because of the machine it is lol

i don't think they particularly had this kind of racing in mind when they built it. lol

This post has been edited by shadow55419 on Feb 4 2013, 04:45 AM
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Posted: Feb 4 2013, 06:44 PM


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Can't wait for Ch. 4! The story is awesome so far.
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  Posted: Feb 5 2013, 08:45 PM


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QUOTE (jusputitonmytab @ Yesterday, 10:44 AM)
Can't wait for Ch. 4! The story is awesome so far.

Thanks for the feedback! happy.gif
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  Posted: Jul 11 2013, 07:44 PM


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FINALLY! IT'S DONE! CHAPTER 4 (PART 1)! Oh boy, it sure took me a very long time! ENJOY!

It was a fine night at Mt. Mizuo. Both parties were totally prepared for the battle tonight. Galleries flooded the mountain. They have heard. Akagi's White Comet versus Mizuo's Dark Knight.

"Oh my god! I can't wait for the battle!" screamed a Ryosuke's fangirl.
"Tell me about it! Ryosuke has not raced for a while now. I wonder how he will fare against the locals?" replied her friend.

"So Ryosuke's gonna race huh?" said a man with black curly hair wearing a black jacket.
"Looks that way. He is in for a tough fight. In terms of fame and skill, *C.o.R.E.* is pretty much equal to Project.D if not more, or so I heard." replied a man that looked like a monk.

*At the peak...*
"Matsumoto, is the car ready?" The eldest Takahashi Brother asked.
"Everything's fine, Ryosuke-san." Fujiwara Takumi's mechanic replied.

"You sure you want to do this, brother? Ryosuke is the leader of Project.D, the team that conquered Kanto." Rensuke questioned his little brother's abilities.
"Don't worry. Since when did I lose?" Zansuke smiled.
"Alright then. Do as you wished."

The 18-year-old kid approached the leader of Project.D.
"We'll start from here side by side and the finish line will be at the Fireweed Garden." Zansuke told Ryosuke.
"Understood." Ryosuke nodded.

"Are the racers ready? The countdown is about to start." Fumihiro yelled loud enough.
"I will do whatever it takes to win." Zansuke thought.

5... 4... 3... 2... 1... GO!!!

The black FD let the white FC took the lead even though it was only one round. They came to the first hairpin; braked, shifted down the gear to 3, cleared the corner.

"Let's see if our brother has the skills." Rensuke's little brother thought.
"Since this is an uphill course, horsepower is one of the winning factors of a battle. My FD should have more power than his FC's. But I wouldn't count on that too much. A great driver can even out the power difference
greatly.
" Zansuke said to himself.

"I wonder, should I get serious for him?" Ryosuke thought.

"The showdown would only begin after we passed the 2nd section." Zansuke speculated.***(See below)

"Are you gonna use that, brother?" Rensuke said to himself.

They have reached the 3rd section.

"Time to show Ryosuke-san what I'm made of!" Zansuke said.

Right before the last hairpin in 3rd section, Zansuke closed his headlights.

Coincidentally, Ryosuke looked at his rear view mirror to see if his opponent was following him.

"Hmm? He's gone? He was just right behind me. Wait...... Could it be?"

A few seconds later, Zansuke opened his headlights back on and now he is side by side with the FC and accelerating.

"How did he...?"

*Flashback*
"I've mastered it." Zansuke said to his aniki.
"Mastered what?" Rensuke asked.
"Fujiwara Takumi's blind attack..." Zansuke said.
"Oh I see.......... You WHAT?!" His brother was shocked.
"Since my whole FD is black and the environment is pretty dark here, Fujiwara Takumi's blind attack would definitely gives me an edge in this battle." Zansuke explained.
"I got the point, but when did you...?" Rensuke asked him again.
"Oh come on brother, you do know we went to look at Project.D's Kanagawa races, right? I picked it up then." The kid said.
"Well, true. Who would've thought huh?" Rensuke was impressed by his brother.
Zansuke smiled.

"Yes, I've passed him. I wonder how's our brother reacting?" Zansuke thought.

"Did he come up with that on his own? Or he just copied Fujiwara's technique?" Ryosuke was baffled.
"Either way, he's not one to be trifled with. I guess I should go all out."


Is the blind attack the only trick Zansuke has up in his sleeve? STAY TUNED!
PART 2 COMING SOON!!!

NOTE: Here's the link to *C.o.R.E*'s home course if you're interested.
https://maps.google.com/maps/ms?msid=214190...011993,0.022724

***2nd section: In the link, there are 5 502 road signs right?(After you zoomed in once!) I divided the course into 6 sections for easier reference...

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Posted: Jul 11 2013, 09:57 PM


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its an interesting idea for Zansuke to use the blind attack, but i can't see Ryosuke falling for it so easily, he's seen Takumi use it too many times.
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  Posted: Jul 12 2013, 02:44 AM


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QUOTE (shadow55419 @ 4 hours, 47 minutes ago)
its an interesting idea for Zansuke to use the blind attack, but i can't see Ryosuke falling for it so easily, he's seen Takumi use it too many times.

Of course I know that.
But who's saying Ryosuke's falling? wink2.gif
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Posted: Jul 16 2013, 07:21 PM


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The Blind attack (according to me facepalm.gif ) is used and effective if the car in front of you has his lights turned on, the cars lights illuminate your path while he isn't seeing you BUT getting in front of him (while his lights are turned on) and without him seeing you during the process (and to try to avoid being overtaken) and the racer doing the blind attack manages to go right in front of the car that easy (especially against Ryosuke who has seen it done a lot of times) is quite awkward (again this is according to me). You better have one hell of explanation how he did that... facepalm.gif


BUT OVER ALL I'm LOVING IT......
NEXT CHAPTER pls.... w00t2.gif
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  Posted: Jul 17 2013, 08:20 AM


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QUOTE (HyperSonic @ Yesterday, 11:21 AM)
The Blind attack (according to me  facepalm.gif ) is used and effective if the car in front of you has his lights turned on, the cars lights illuminate your path while he isn't seeing you BUT getting in front of him (while his lights are turned on) and without him seeing you during the process (and to try to avoid being overtaken) and the racer doing the blind attack manages to go right in front of the car that easy (especially against Ryosuke who has seen it done a lot of times) is quite awkward (again this is according to me). You better have one hell of explanation how he did that...  facepalm.gif


BUT OVER ALL I'm LOVING IT......
NEXT CHAPTER pls.... w00t2.gif

I've corrected that said part to what I wanted to express. I simplified a little too much previously, thus causing misunderstanding.

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Posted: Jul 18 2013, 06:13 PM


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I love the way you have corrected it and cleared up every misunderstanding I have. The blind attack is effective only up to the point that you are side by side with the opponent or in the case of a straight you can overtake him using the other lane which would defeat the purpose of having a racing line, and might put the racer into a disadvantageous line towards the incoming corner.

I love this.... w00t2.gif

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