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caos950042 | Posted: Jul 10 2006, 01:44 AM |
~A grunt in the Game called Life~ Group: Advanced Members Posts: 616 Member No.: 14,415 Joined: Nov 14th 2005 Location: Update Profile | Only one jump? I still want to know how Kasumi looks like. |
FinToy-83 | Posted: Jul 11 2006, 02:18 AM |
IDW Banned Member Group: Banned Posts: 2,975 Member No.: 14,568 Joined: Nov 24th 2005 Location: Varkaus, Finland | 2000GT.. as in TRD 2000GT ,that revised edition of MR2? or that old Bond-car? either way, cool. |
Rudy | Posted: Jul 11 2006, 03:33 PM |
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Hannah | Posted: Jul 11 2006, 03:57 PM |
Remember Me Group: PONY FANATIC Posts: 2,243 Member No.: 8,296 Joined: Jun 19th 2005 Location: Update Profile | *giggles and claps hands giddily* Ehehehe! I really like how this chapter turned out, Dori! *nods and thumbs up* Keep going!! Ganbare ne!~ ♥ |
EA11R | Posted: Jul 11 2006, 08:50 PM |
coffee break anyone? Group: Advanced Members Posts: 508 Member No.: 15,978 Joined: Feb 17th 2006 Location: Palmdale, CA | a very entertaining chapter! but two things bugged me: The sileighty is neither uphill nor downhill; she[they] race only on Usui, which has no uphill or downhill. maybe you should change her quote to "I'm not an uphill driver" I don't understand why Kenji and Itsuki suddenly are furius with Iketani. it was an excellent chapter, but some of it went right over my head, and some does not make sense. keep up the good work otherwise though. sorry for critisizing, but I am this critical of myself too, so don't feel bad. |
Rudy | Posted: Jul 11 2006, 08:53 PM |
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Aerys | Posted: Jul 11 2006, 09:22 PM |
IDW Member Group: Members Posts: 17 Member No.: 18,373 Joined: Jun 14th 2006 Location: Philippines | Great chapter, I really love the old GS gang especially the trio of lonely drivers. BTW, I can understand the engine upgrade but why install the turbo? Wataru had that similar setup and eventually changed it to a supercharger since a supercharger is way better than a turbo in terms of handling, engine life, etc. |
Rudy | Posted: Jul 11 2006, 09:28 PM |
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Aerys | Posted: Jul 11 2006, 10:06 PM |
IDW Member Group: Members Posts: 17 Member No.: 18,373 Joined: Jun 14th 2006 Location: Philippines | Understood but you know also that more horse power doesn't mean it's better. IMHO, if he can afford to replace the engine it safe to say he can disregard that part even though it's still usable. Just my two cents and anxiously waiting for your next chapter release. This post has been edited by Aerys on Jul 11 2006, 11:58 PM |
?wha? | Posted: Jul 12 2006, 03:13 AM |
In sexy black'n gold :D Group: Advanced Members Posts: 2,254 Member No.: 5,914 Joined: Mar 2nd 2005 Location: Sydney Australia | oh yeah go the 85.... no now its an 86! and kickass quote XD dying from a broken heart or a broken neck? XDXD i'd take the neck, at least you're happy when u die XD |
Levin_86 | Posted: Jul 12 2006, 04:19 AM |
underpowered Alliance leader Group: Advanced Members Posts: 1,170 Member No.: 17,990 Joined: May 25th 2006 Location: Update Profile | i think it is actually a filler chapter.... but it is great non the less... |
Rudy | Posted: Jul 12 2006, 05:27 AM |
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Nomake Wan | Posted: Jul 12 2006, 03:28 PM |
ShiMACHaze Group: Advanced Members Posts: 19,542 Member No.: 5,394 Joined: Feb 5th 2005 Location: Drydock | Trying to look through outsider goggles, I can see why some people are daunted... you throw around automotive technical terms like crazy and just kinda... assume people know what you're talking about. Might want to tone that down a bit... or explain it more. Then again, if you go the latter route, you may as well just call it, "Ryousuke's Guide to Writing a Successful Fanfiction" instead. XP Just some general comments before I actually read the thing completely. I'll do it, though, I swear! |
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eighty_D | Posted: Jul 12 2006, 05:44 PM |
lv.23 lurker Group: Advanced Members Posts: 1,107 Member No.: 15,593 Joined: Jan 26th 2006 Location: Fairbanks, AK | Nice work keep them coming. |
caos950042 | Posted: Jul 14 2006, 02:04 AM |
~A grunt in the Game called Life~ Group: Advanced Members Posts: 616 Member No.: 14,415 Joined: Nov 14th 2005 Location: Update Profile | I still don't get how Mako knows that Itsuki used to own an AE85. |
Rudy | Posted: Jul 14 2006, 03:06 AM |
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MAD MAX | Posted: Jul 14 2006, 09:56 AM |
Rotary Enthusiast Group: Advanced Members Posts: 998 Member No.: 2,262 Joined: Jul 14th 2004 Location: Quebec, Canada | Very good, I really love the Wangan Midnight addition to your story. I don't want to blow your bubble but something annoys me though. There is no way in hell the S30 Z can reach a speed that high (400+ km/h). Even with that kind of heavy moddification I say that its limit is probably around 350km/h max before the car becomes ridicously unstable. 400+ can only be reached with amazing engineering. |
Rudy | Posted: Jul 14 2006, 01:49 PM |
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WRX3288 | Posted: Jul 14 2006, 02:27 PM |
IDW Supremo Member Group: Advanced Members Posts: 784 Member No.: 9,746 Joined: Jul 5th 2005 Location: New Jersey | Man this is too good combining both wangan and initial d can't ask for any better. Sits by waiting impatiently for next chapter. lol |
ezeedee | Posted: Jul 14 2006, 05:13 PM |
IDW Member Group: Members Posts: 17 Member No.: 18,930 Joined: Jul 13th 2006 Location: Update Profile | damn that shit is good! mad props! |
MAD MAX | Posted: Jul 14 2006, 07:10 PM | ||
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I don't see how its funny.... If you take this car at say 300+ km/h even with aerodynamic mods, you have a 30 year old chassis wich is also very light (S30 are around 1000kg).Addition all that and you get something real scary at high speed. The mechanic of the Z could probably reach 400+ km but the body wont let it. Forget about reaching the 400km/h barrier with these cars if you want to be realistic, only Verrons can physically reach that. | ||
caos950042 | Posted: Jul 14 2006, 08:58 PM |
~A grunt in the Game called Life~ Group: Advanced Members Posts: 616 Member No.: 14,415 Joined: Nov 14th 2005 Location: Update Profile | It must be hard for her to drive with that Playboy-material bust. |
Rudy | Posted: Jul 15 2006, 02:17 PM |
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eighty_D | Posted: Jul 16 2006, 03:02 PM |
lv.23 lurker Group: Advanced Members Posts: 1,107 Member No.: 15,593 Joined: Jan 26th 2006 Location: Fairbanks, AK | Good as always Midnight looking foreword to more. And don't drop all the tech stuff it is what makes your FF good imo. |
thrett | Posted: Jul 16 2006, 05:16 PM |
IDW God Member Group: Members Posts: 178 Member No.: 18,478 Joined: Jun 19th 2006 Location: Lomita | good stuff man keep it up |
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