Close Topic Options

Only one jump?

I still want to know how Kasumi looks like.

2000GT.. as in TRD 2000GT ,that revised edition of MR2? or that old Bond-car? either way, cool.

(THIS POST WAS REMOVED BY REQUEST)

This post has been edited by Midnight Dorifuta on Jul 14 2006, 12:34 AM

*giggles and claps hands giddily* Ehehehe!
I really like how this chapter turned out, Dori!
*nods and thumbs up* Keep going!! Ganbare ne!~ ♥

a very entertaining chapter! but two things bugged me:

The sileighty is neither uphill nor downhill; she[they] race only on Usui, which has no uphill or downhill. maybe you should change her quote to "I'm not an uphill driver"

I don't understand why Kenji and Itsuki suddenly are furius with Iketani.

it was an excellent chapter, but some of it went right over my head, and some does not make sense. keep up the good work otherwise though. sorry for critisizing, but I am this critical of myself too, so don't feel bad.

(THIS POST WAS REMOVED BY REQUEST)

Great chapter, I really love the old GS gang especially the trio of lonely drivers.

BTW, I can understand the engine upgrade but why install the turbo? Wataru had that similar setup and eventually changed it to a supercharger since a supercharger is way better than a turbo in terms of handling, engine life, etc.

(THIS POST WAS REMOVED BY REQUEST)

Understood but you know also that more horse power doesn't mean it's better. IMHO, if he can afford to replace the engine it safe to say he can disregard that part even though it's still usable.

Just my two cents and anxiously waiting for your next chapter release.

This post has been edited by Aerys on Jul 11 2006, 11:58 PM

oh yeah go the 85.... no now its an 86!

and kickass quote XD dying from a broken heart or a broken neck? XDXD

i'd take the neck, at least you're happy when u die XD

i think it is actually a filler chapter.... but it is great non the less...

(THIS POST WAS REMOVED BY REQUEST)

Trying to look through outsider goggles, I can see why some people are daunted... you throw around automotive technical terms like crazy and just kinda... assume people know what you're talking about. Might want to tone that down a bit... or explain it more. Then again, if you go the latter route, you may as well just call it, "Ryousuke's Guide to Writing a Successful Fanfiction" instead. XP

Just some general comments before I actually read the thing completely. I'll do it, though, I swear!

Nice work keep them coming.

I still don't get how Mako knows that Itsuki used to own an AE85.

(THIS POST WAS REMOVED BY REQUEST)

This post has been edited by Midnight Dorifuta on Jul 19 2006, 10:10 PM

Very good, I really love the Wangan Midnight addition to your story.

I don't want to blow your bubble but something annoys me though.

There is no way in hell the S30 Z can reach a speed that high (400+ km/h). Even with that kind of heavy moddification I say that its limit is probably around 350km/h max before the car becomes ridicously unstable. 400+ can only be reached with amazing engineering.

(THIS POST WAS REMOVED BY REQUEST)

This post has been edited by Midnight Dorifuta on Jul 14 2006, 01:58 PM

Man this is too good combining both wangan and initial d can't ask for any better.

Sits by waiting impatiently for next chapter. lol

damn that shit is good! mad props!

I don't see how its funny.... If you take this car at say 300+ km/h even with aerodynamic mods, you have a 30 year old chassis wich is also very light (S30 are around 1000kg).Addition all that and you get something real scary at high speed. The mechanic of the Z could probably reach 400+ km but the body wont let it.

Forget about reaching the 400km/h barrier with these cars if you want to be realistic, only Verrons can physically reach that.

It must be hard for her to drive with that Playboy-material bust.

(THIS POST WAS REMOVED BY REQUEST)

This post has been edited by Midnight Dorifuta on Jul 15 2006, 02:21 PM

Good as always Midnight looking foreword to more. And don't drop all the tech stuff it is what makes your FF good imo.

good stuff man keep it up