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> [FANFIC] Planetarium, A new story by yours truly.
Sanae
  Posted: Aug 28 2010, 08:53 PM


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This is the story of how a Meteor turned into a White Comet, found the Red Suns and met the Speed Stars.

Planetarium

Let me know what you guys think! happy.gif
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Posted: Aug 29 2010, 08:42 AM


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You're absolutely right Sanae grin2.gif I'll see what happens next
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Posted: Aug 29 2010, 10:40 AM


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I don't always read fanfics, but when I do, I read Sanae Equis. Wait... tongue.gif
Nah but really, I don't often, but this is interesting! I'll give it a read soon and give feedback.
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  Posted: Aug 29 2010, 10:46 AM


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@ Kou-chan, thanks again for the encouragement! happy.gif

Thanks Ryo-chan! I hope you'll like the story so far.

I'm already working on Chapter Two and I'm hoping I'll finish it very, very soon.

Don't miss it! tongue.gif
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Posted: Aug 29 2010, 05:39 PM


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Keep up the good work, Sanae! smile.gif
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Posted: Aug 29 2010, 07:01 PM


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awesome story w00t2.gif
nice work over there smile.gif
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  Posted: Aug 30 2010, 07:53 AM


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Thanks for the feedback guys. happy.gif

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  Posted: Sep 2 2010, 11:13 PM


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Chapter Five is up.

Thanks for reading! happy.gif

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Posted: Sep 5 2010, 07:22 AM


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I'm liking this story a lot, but I especially like the end of this chapter. great work, Sanae!
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Posted: Sep 5 2010, 07:44 AM


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This whole story is one of the best fanfics I have ever read! It covers all of Ryosuke's bases from the past very well, and goes into detail the things that we know of his past, and more.
No one seems far out of character, and it's a very interesting and enjoyable read. I'll be looking forward to each new chapter.

Also, props for being able to write such great stories so fast. One of the biggest frustrations I've found with fanfiction writers is that they take forever to update their work (*eyes a few Vocaloid stories*)
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Posted: Sep 6 2010, 09:05 AM


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I've been the past week on a road trip and when I arrived Home and checked the forum w00t2.gif the story have already 5 Chapters ohmy.gif
I have already read them and looks awesome!
keep up the work sanae thumbsup.gif
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  Posted: Sep 6 2010, 09:26 PM


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Wow guys, thanks a lot for your kind words guys, you're awesome people!

I'll keep on doing my best, I promise. happy.gif

Also, here's Chapter Six.

Happy reading!
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  Posted: Sep 10 2010, 01:17 AM


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Just to let you know that I've just posted Chapter Seven.

I hope you enjoy it! happy.gif
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  Posted: Sep 16 2010, 02:22 PM


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Triple-posting FTW! tongue.gif

I kind of forgot to update this but I thought of letting you guys know that the story is up to chapter eleven now.
You can catch up with the new chapters by clicking here.

As always, thanks for reading. happy.gif

This post has been edited by Sanae on Sep 16 2010, 02:23 PM
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Posted: Sep 16 2010, 02:39 PM


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Bumping this thread so you can post soon. smile.gif
Also, I'm sorry I can't keep posting reviews of each chapter, but I just have too much to say! I mean, right when I think "Well hey, isn't Fumihiro an old friend of Ryosuke? When will he appea-- oh wow." laugh.gif
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  Posted: Sep 17 2010, 11:28 PM


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Thanks Ryo-chan!

Also, Chapter Twelve is up!

Is that soon enough? tongue.gif

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Posted: Sep 22 2010, 02:49 AM


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The fic's great and the way you've portrayed Ryosuke's past is top notch. The pacing's great and each chapter is surprising in its own, good way. Keep it up ^^.
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Posted: Sep 30 2010, 05:33 AM


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I'll catch up on all the chaps tomorrow!!! grin2.gif
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Posted: Oct 30 2010, 09:34 PM


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(yes i'm bumping an old thread. I figure it may be a better way to get to the author than writing a review down ffn.net tongue.gif)

Your story makes mine absolutely pale in comparison. You might as well tell me that those ware canon and i wouldn't know better. Ryosuke started out a bit Sue-ish but he sure shed those over the course of the story, while Keisuke... well, he's just getting into the story proper and saying that his characteristic met my expectation is still a bit early.

In simpler language: MOAR.
Sanae
  Posted: Aug 19 2012, 08:19 AM


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Just wanted to let you all know that this story is NOT dead after all.

I've just posted two all-new chapters on ff.net. You can find them here.

Hopefully, the old readers will still be interested in catching up with the story and, maybe some new ones will want to use their precious time to check it out.

Either way, thanks for reading!
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Posted: Aug 19 2012, 10:39 AM


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Oh snap, Sanae's back?! We are officially back to good days here at IDW. cool.gif
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Posted: Aug 27 2012, 11:04 PM


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Little does everyone know... I took that hiatus from writing my story to read this fanfiction... And

Holy crap it is amazing!

Sanae. Please please please write more. Never before have I been so captivated in a story. My writing doesn't even hold a candle to the sheer amount of time and research you've put into this. Keisuke is too much of a punk. I love it! Give me more! I need this now! THIS IS WHAT MY MUSE CRAVES! wub.gif