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> [FANFIC] akina's nightmare, a fanfic
s12drifter
  Posted: May 8 2007, 05:52 PM


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chapter 1. takumi's loss




the year is 2015 most of the trueno's and s12's have been either junked, crushed or been sold as parts, very little of the s12's and trueno's exist today even more rare in there stock form


as takumi races down mt.akina he's thinking should he take the contract they offered him at D1 grand prix "man takumi if you we're on our team we would be the best in D1 no doubt" takumi says he'll think about it in fact he promised . then all of a sudden takumi see's two pair of head light's behind him in his rear view mirror he speeds up expecting for the other car to do the same. and the car behind him speed's up then takumi starts pushing it so does the other driver. huh, but how? as the car chased him it only got closer and closer until it got so close he got so close so fast he hit takumi. takumi: no f**king way. now takumi was giving it his all but his all just wasn't cutting it then by the time takumi saw the headlights we're gone he was thinking oh no. from previous experience caused him to look to the side. they we're side by side and getting near the 5 hairpins of akina as takumi still remained clam the other driver didn't seem one bit disturbed by the race at hand. and then they hit the hairpins, takumi was sure he was gonna lose him but he was wrong, the other driver took the outside and inched his way near takumi. again they we're side by side except with the other car 3 inch's ahead takumi was thinking. is this a ghost no, no it can't be it must be a nightmare.[/I] they entered the second hairpin this time takumi used the gutter move and was now ahead just by a inch. no, no that's it this has to be a nightmare the other car started to gain speed again and then they hit the hairpin the other driver almost losing control ride's his car on the gutter like takumi, takumi now starting to get nervous and pressured more then ever takumi starts to push the trueno to new levels (11,000, 12,000 13,000 ba ba ba ba ba ba ba). they cleared the third hairpin takumi takes the lead again by two inchís.


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(Phone ringing) hello whata want??? bunta have you heard of that new racer? who the one with the nissan? Yeah howed you know? i raced him i tell you that was one of the hardest race's i've ever raced from the look of it that guy had what look like a silvia s12 i couldn't get a good look at it, but it was one of the hardest race's that i've raced in some time.
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mean while takumi had his hands full going into the fourth hairpin and coming out again the car managed to some how come out in front. takumi thinking (are you playing a trick on me old man) takumi then pushed it even harder thatís when the car passed him and takumi saw it the badge nissan silvia se. [i]!!!
into the fifth turn takumi started to imagine the impreza in front of him. takumi gutted the car so did the silvia as they we're drifting through the turn takumi started to gain some speed on the silvia and then.....


To be continued....

This post has been edited by s12drifter on May 18 2007, 04:58 PM
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Posted: May 8 2007, 06:57 PM


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Fix the formatting and punctuation - there are no periods, so its like one long sentence. distinguish the dialog from the narrative.
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  Posted: May 8 2007, 06:59 PM


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And then takumi just slipped by the silvia then the other driver pushed it and passed takumi. Takumiís thoughtís weíre how could this happen thereís just no way ether this is a nightmare or that old man (bunta) is playing a trick on me . As the silvia sped off takumi could see it was a hatch back.

Chapter 1. end takumiís loss
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Takumiís slump chapter 2. Start

Do you really think that can happen bunta? Yeah but knowing takumi heíll strive to improve and go beyond that point, itís just a matter of time.

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The next morning takumi asked his dad about the Silvia se. he said the se only came standard in v6 but if you wanted to you could swap out parts from the other Silviaís and make it really perform. That same morning takumi went up mt.akina as he was going up he saw a white mazda fc and a black evo 11 battling past him wow down hills sure have become popular. As takumi got to the top a Nissan 390xz pulled up and revved itís engine. Takumi raced the 390xz the first corner takumi was ahead, the second corner takumi couldnít hear the 390xz anymore, and by the third corner the 390xz was dusted. Takumi thought how could I be in D1 Grand prix if I got beat in a down hill . Then takumi went to the gas station to get some gas as he pulled up he saw itsuki, Hay takumi look what I got (pointing to a 2011 trueno) itís my new car. What happened to the ae85 takumi asked? Oh a guy offered me 300,000 yen for it he said it was a classic.

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So how was the Silvia? Oh no problems I can easily rev it up to 14,000 rpmís but it does need improvement. Remember that engine is just a project itís still in beta testing just lay off the redlining for now ok? Ok boss.

car glossary:

evo11:this evo has a body of the starion and the evo x it has the headlights of the evo ix and the tail lights of the subaru impreza sti. it come's standard as a sedan like all the other model's.but if you wanted the sport edition it came as a 2 door hatchback with a tri turbo system.

390xz: this car is the bigger brother of the 300zx and the 350z. the car come's with a twin turbo system and a new v8 engine it also offered a hatchback model with stock lsd.

2011 trueno: this is a updated modal of the ae86 but better and more improved. however toyota stoped it's production the same year it came out because it was costing toyota too much money to build. only 500 models exist.

To be continued....

This post has been edited by s12drifter on May 9 2007, 12:33 PM
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Posted: May 9 2007, 08:58 PM


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omfg, I laughed... so hard.. best post... EV4R!
MOOOAAAR! lol

I'm sorry, I reallly do think that's like the best fanfic ever.. lmao
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Posted: May 9 2007, 10:53 PM


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Thats not even s12's fanfic, he's letting his friends have fun with it. (As you can tell, theres some good spelling and puncuation)

But seriously....

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Posted: May 9 2007, 11:07 PM


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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUGHHGHGUHGHAHAHABHLAHAB

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Posted: May 10 2007, 02:18 AM


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  Posted: May 10 2007, 06:34 AM


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i'm the one typing this i write better on paper then type.
note: none of my friends like initial d.

EDIT: i wrote this on paper then typed it up.

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Posted: May 12 2007, 04:24 AM


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Oh lawd i wanna see this fanfic go on...PLEASE...let him have back his posting privilege so he can finish this
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  Posted: May 12 2007, 08:35 PM


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yo kashi how did that engine hold up? Oh the engine it was awesome some fine piece of work what did you do to get a 4 cylinder engine so powerful? Well first we took the old engine block and redesigned it with only the best of what we had at hand. Then we did the most precise engine balancing you only hear in racing, after that we bored out the cylinder to about the size of a over sized v8 cylinder. And well what made the whole thing come together was the evit. Kashi: the evit what's that? Mechanic: it stand's for electronic valve independent timing, it's impossible for it to miss and get this no camshaft. Also this engine is strong enough it can handle some of the most powerful turbo's from the v8 turbo's to the dodge viper turbo's. Kashi: oh wow and what turbo does it have now? Mechanic: none right now its pure N/A so far the hp output is around 300hp.

Mean while.....

Itsuki: so takumi you want to take a ride in my new trueno? Takumi mutter's should have stuck with the 85 you we're safer that way. Itsuki: what takumi?
I mean sure why not? as itsuki took takumi around in the ae120 takumi could only think about last night he gave it his all but he lost still wondering he Told itsuki to go to akigi there he saw the silvia the same one but it sounded different.

ba ba ba ba ba ba ba ba ba ba ba ba ba ba ba. itsuki asked hay what's going on? that silvia has been redling for at least 7 minutes straight one by stander said ba ba ba ba ba ba ba ba started to rev down tsssssss quick get the tools! one mechanic screamed. as they popped the hood theyíre faceís turned from worried to scared when they saw what had happened. ok get this car in the hauler quick and letís take off!
as they left takumi saw radiator fluid on the floor of where the Silvia had been parked.

I told you not f**king redline the engine yen doesnít grow on treeís you know that. this engine cost more yen then you will ever make in your life. Sorry boss. No, no more your FIRED take every thing with you and get the f**k out of my factory NOW! as the mechanic left the office the boss said ‚ÄúDamn mechanics donít know how to listen when you tell them something‚ÄĚ. pickís up phone and callís the engine department so howís the engine. Its ok, its running rough though we believe it over heated and........


Mean while on akina



Baaaaaaam shifts baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaam. Look zoke a old sti letís race it. Ok fine letís. as they started to get behind bunta, bunta heard them and let them pass thatís when he said. ‚ÄúDamn kids when they will ever learn‚ÄĚ. as bunta pursued them without even trying, the other driver started to panic driver: oh crap heís catching up. Passenger: WTF how in the hell is that even possible we have a nsx type re and he has a sti how? as bunta started to pass them while smoking a cigarette they hit the guardrail and fell off mt.akina.

glossary

nsx type re: this is the nsx type re which stands for race edition. this car comes with a
redesigned six cylinder inline engine and performance tries. it also comes with a fiber glass body and a carbon fiber chassis. total hp output:567


evit: the valves move independently from each other there fore the engine will never
miss even under extreme pressure unless abused.


To be continued........

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Posted: May 12 2007, 09:06 PM


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THE AWESOMEZORS FANFIC CONTINUES!!!!
I still demand MOAR!

I'm enjoying this too much.
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Posted: May 18 2007, 03:41 PM


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HEY!!! wheres the story gone to?! i want more!!!
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  Posted: May 18 2007, 06:43 PM


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(sorry i'm late on this one guys it's just with school and reviews for finals i haven't gotten a chance until now)

as itsuki dropped takumi off at the gas station takumi was wondering if heíll ever face that driver again. Just as takumi was getting in his ae86 keisuke pulled up and told takumi to follow him, It seemed very serious to takumi so he followed keisuke. As they approached the place takumi could see lights surrounding a somewhat small building. As they started getting closer takumi could see the project d team and buntaís impreza and itsukiís ae120. wow thereís a lot of people here I wonder what itís all about? as they finally reached the small building takumi saw bunta and ryosuke talking. As the fd and ae86 arrived ryosuke approached takumi. hay takumi we need to talk to you itís important it stands on your future and the future of the entire prefecture. Please come this way. as everyone entered a somewhat large tent takumi was the last one to enter. ryosuke: takumi weíve been hearing about a Silvia s12 it gave your father bunta a challenge but he beat it. Do you know anything about it? Takumi: yeah Iíve raced it I donít know how but I lost to it. Bunta: thatís because that car has something no other car in Japan has its called evit. the germens made it but only made 10 prototypes. Ryosuke: with the evit itís impossible for any engine to miss it adapts to any engine. If you have the money though the system goes for 100million yen thatís quite a lot of money who ever has that system must be rich as hell. Takumi: I noticed it was revving high then I was. Ryosuke: thatís because the evit adds 2,000rpmís and if the car had engine balancing itís about 13k or 14k. Keisuke: takumi Iíd like to talk to you outside with ryosuke. they take takumi around to the back of the small building takumi: what is that? Ryosuke: youíll find out later but we do need to install it on the ae86 itís been long over due now. Keisuke: I agree itíll benefit the 86 in more then one way. Now about that talk‚Ķ‚Ķ

Inside the tent….

Itsuki: Iíve never heard of the Nissan s12? Bunta: thatís because it never became popular. Back in those days ffís use to rule the streets, they had the best handling of that time until Nissan came out with the s13 which offered better handling then any of the ffís at that time. Thatís where the phase ‚Äúif you want a car for handling get a silvia‚ÄĚ came from. Unfortunately the s12 was never a good handling car, but you could modify it with s13 or s14 parts so it could handle better.

At the factory…

Weíve done it boss, we got it working. Boss: good, good whereís kashi he needs to test it? Mechanic: oh kashi heís out right now. Heís testing his lotus type br6. As kashiís lotus swinged around a tight corner he was thinking ‚Äúit can be better I just need to push it‚ÄĚ. As the next corner started to come he quickly smashed on the brakes and the tires locked up tires squealing as he quickly got back on the gas the lotus started to drift insanely. As he started to come out of the corner and into the straight away the Lotus almost spins out. damn a little too much drifting on that corner. phone ringing damn what do they want now? As he pulled over a Nissan Preda passed him at a high velocity. As he looked back at the Preda to make sure it wasnít a Skyline the phone rang again. hello? Boss: weíve got the engine fixed come and test it out. Kashi ok Iím on my way. As kashi took off he started to see parts of a car on the floor. is? Is that the parts from the car that passed me? as an image came to his head about his lotus crashing a chill came up his back. oh man I gotta get out of here. Quickly rushing to get out of there he ran over a broken control arm and got a flat tire.

Back at project d…..

itís a prefect fit. Start it up takumi! Car starts to crank and crank and crank but no start ok hold on. ok try now takumi. Baam baaaam the car came to life takumi: hay is it suppose to be idling higher? Fumihiro: yeah itís supposed to.

Takumiís slump end.

glossary

Nissan preda: this car is based off the Nissan skyline and has taken its place in racing.
The preda is a awd just like the skyline but with less weight. The body looks like the 2008 GTR except the side quarter panels. The preda comes with a small 8 cylinder inline motor. Total hp out put 460 hp

Lotus br6: this car resembles the lotus Elise but with a more aggressive look to it. It has a 5 cylinder sohc motor, and is probably the lightest car lotus has made thus far. Total hp out put 230 hp.