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> [FANFIC] SOS-Dan versus Project.D!, Wait, can any of them drive?!
twitchykun
  Posted: Oct 9 2007, 08:01 PM


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Chapter 9: Takumi's brain.

"Takumi nii-chan is fast. But as long as I can keep him behind me, then that's fine. I can't lose here, the pride of the SOS-dan is on the line!"

Haruhi's words echoed through my mind, as clear as day. Funny, I don't remember taking any ESP classes. Maybe it's a side effect from hanging around the SOS-dan all day. Anyway....

"Good, we're approaching the end of the course. Takumi's good, but I think I can keep up with him."

Haruhi and Takumi reached the end of the course, their cars locked in a dead heat. As the cars made the switchback for the uphill, the two drivers glanced at each other. Their faces were locked with determination, neither one yielding an inch. Their engines screamed again, as the two cars made their descent up Ura Rokko.

"This battle is somehow similar to my battle with Tachi-san. Haru-chan is faster than greased lightning, but that's all. Knowing her, she's probably going all out on the car."

As the two cars made their ascent up the mountain, Takumi slowly started formulating a strategy to defeat his cousin.

"I'm going to have to catch her by surprise. I can't beat Haru-chan straight on. The car is built well, all around. It seems a little too fast to be a 'street-car'. Anyway, while I don't like to use 'it', it seems I have no choice."

~Back on the mountaintop, Project.D side~

"Kenta, you actually got her phone number?"

"Of course I did, Keisuke-san."

"Wait, you....got her number?"

"Yes I did, Keisuke-san. Didn't you get Kyoko-san's number too?"

"......................"

Somewhere back in Saitama, Kyoko let out a sneeze.

"Hm...I'd better take some medicine."
Meteor
Posted: Oct 9 2007, 09:07 PM


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Another good chapter. But they're still rather short.
twitchykun
  Posted: Oct 21 2007, 01:53 PM


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Chapter 10: Counterattack (Again)!

"Uh-oh, I'm starting to get the feeling that I pushed it a little too hard. I've been losing grip on the front tires since the switchback at the bottom."

Haruhi's DC5 started showing signs of understeering. As the two cars worked their way up the mountain, the area around the mountain suddenly became dark.

"Grrr....I can't lose to Takumi-niichan. Not like this! NOT NOW!"

"What the....? Closed space? No...."

"It would seem that the current situation for Suzumiya-san is very grave. Fujiwara seems to be gaining ground as the road gets higher. Her frustration level is increasing at a fantastic rate."

"Great, Koizumi, thanks for stating the obvious. Yuki, how much longer until we start seeing the rampaging glowing demon things?"

"At this rate, any second now. Suzumiya-san's frustration level is rapidly increasing."

"Kyon-kun, I'm scared."

Mikuru held my hand tightly. In all honesty, this situation I was in felt all too familiar. However, there's no way prince charming would jump into a moving Integra Type-R. And if there was one, I really wish he'd step in and take one for the team.

"Mikuru-chan, I am too."

No kidding. Great, how can I kiss her now? Wait, I think I have an idea.

"Yuki, can you connect me to Haruhi right now? I need to tell her something!"

"Affirmative. Please wait."

The closed space started increasing at an alarming rate. It was then I found myself within Haruhi's mind. The image her subconscious mind had set-up looked like that classroom we met in, 2 years ago. That same seat by the window, with hers behind me.

"Kyon? What are you doing here?"

"Haruhi. There's something you need to know. Well, I think it's something you already know, but I think you need to hear it from me again."

"Out with it already, Kyon, you know I don't like waiting!"

"I love you. No matter what happens, Haruhi, I'll be here for you."

I kissed her, slow and deep. As I held her, tears started coming down her face. Now, why can't she be this cute all the time?

"Kyon, you know I love you. Always have, always will. Now get outta here, I have a race to finish!"

She pushed me out of the room, and before I knew it, I was back at the mountain summit, waiting for the race to finish. The closed space around us had dissipated.

"Kyon....he's so sweet. Now I'd better make it back to him, and the SOS-brigade."

"There! There's my spot!"

On the last consecutive turns of the Ura Rokko uphill, the DC5's understeering had disrupted Haruhi's timing to the point where she started missing the ideal line, bit by bit. However for Takumi, that bit was all he needed to make his move.


To be continued.....
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Posted: Oct 26 2007, 02:57 PM


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This is truly teh epicness! Keep it going!!
twitchykun
  Posted: Nov 8 2007, 11:04 AM


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Chapter 11: A clash of wills.

As the two cars entered the final corner, the two cars were neck-in-neck. The engines howled in the night as the cars sped to the final goal. Eventually, the loss of traction to the DC5's tires became a problem.

The loss of traction on the corner exit affected Haruhi adversely, enabling Takumi to get the better exit line.

"Here! This is where I finish the race!"

Takumi and the hachi-roku sped past the DC5 and reached the goal. The result of this race was this. A convincing victory for Project.D.

When the race was over I ran over to Haruhi. Oddly enough, she didn't seem crestfallen at her defeat. Rather, she seemed calm.

"Kyon, I'm letting you drive for the rest of the month. I'm tired."

"Got it, Haruhi. You want me to carry you?" I scooped up Haruhi and carried her in my arms. Despite having crazy strength, she's light. I kissed her on the forehead. It was then that I whispered,

"Don't you ever do anything this crazy again."

She gave me her usual look of "Yea right." Cute.

"Mikuru-chan, here are your keys. This DC5 is a good car."

"Suzumiya-san, that was some really good driving. If it pleases you, would you be able to teach me some techniques sometime?" Koizumi, not now. I like Haruhi when she's quiet. She'll get excited and then--

"Of course! I've gotta have my vice-chief drive out with me sometime!"

Damnit. Thanks, Koizumi.

The Project.D team walked over to us. Everyone all gathered at the center of the lot.

"Suzumiya-san and the rest of the SOS-Dan, thank you for such an enjoyable expedition. Miss Haruhi, you've got raw talent. However, it needs polishing. You have to keep honing your skills in order to move up in the racing world. Talent can only get you so far." Jeez, this Project.D leader has charisma to spare. Maybe I should join them.

"Takahashi-san, thank you. I'm starting to see what the purpose of Project.D is. Good luck on the rest of your "season", or whatever you call it."

Takumi then congratulated Haruhi.

"Haru-chan, you're something else alright. That's what I'd expect from someone in our family tree. Come by the Tofu shop sometime, Dad'll whip up some ganmodoki for ya."

"Really! Can Bunta-jiisan make enough for my SOS-Dan?"

"Eeehhhh....I think so. Call first if you do decide to come down to Haruna."

And with that, the SOS-Dan's first race ended with a defeat. Haruhi was not disappointed, but she felt that there was a need for improvement. One can only wonder where this club will take us...

"Kyon, kiss me! I want cuddle time now! You can always have your inner monologues later! Com'ere!"

Some time later....

It was another day just like usual, board games with Koizumi, Yuki reading a book, Mikuru making tea, when just in time to break us from our melancholic state....

"EVERYONE! My Uncle Bunta is inviting us over to his Tofu shop in Haruna! Pack your bags, we're going to Gunma!"

Crap....here we go again.
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Posted: Nov 8 2007, 03:21 PM


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Once again,

made of WIN!!!
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Posted: Nov 8 2007, 07:29 PM


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WIN multiplier x9001

Please update soon.
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Posted: Dec 18 2007, 09:46 PM


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Awesome fic, I loled at the narrative. You pinned down Kyon's cynicism really well here. I would have commented earlier, but I just regsitered a few days ago.

QUOTE (HashiriyaR32 @ Aug 15 2007, 02:42 PM)
Ask Pikachu_Fragger on initial-d.com/forums.  I PM'd him about your fic a few days after my last reply.


Wait, WHAAAAT? blink.gif

I've kinda skipped on the other miscellaneous posts and focused on the actual chapters, so I COMPLETELY missed this one. Would it be too late if I tried it? pinch2.gif
twitchykun
  Posted: Dec 19 2007, 12:35 AM


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wow, not at all. Be my guest.

Oh, and welcome to /idw/. I'd try posting in our welcome forums.
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Posted: Jan 9 2008, 01:20 PM


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Is it alright if I post this on FF.net?
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  Posted: Jan 10 2008, 01:31 AM


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QUOTE (HashiriyaR32 @ Yesterday at 1:20 PM)
Is it alright if I post this on FF.net?

I'll only allow it if pertinent links to the original thread with the fanfic are included with the upload, and only if my name is on it.
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Posted: Jan 10 2008, 07:02 PM


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Got a question: Which section should I put it in? The ID section or the Haruhi section?
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  Posted: Jan 10 2008, 07:24 PM


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QUOTE (HashiriyaR32 @ Today at 7:02 PM)
Got a question: Which section should I put it in? The ID section or the Haruhi section?

i'm not sure how it all works, but try posting it in both to see what happens. It is a crossover fic, after all.
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Posted: Jan 10 2008, 10:17 PM


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It won't let me put ANY sort of URL in the document. If just wipes it clean. Doing it without http:// has no effect. Looks like I may have to post the link in my FF.net profile.
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i guess just the contact information then. At least plug Initial D world in there somewhere.
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Posted: Jan 12 2008, 12:28 PM


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This is made of epic win and hawtness

All hail the Divine God-Empress. Project D is finished, once and for all. Muahahahahaha....
twitchykun
  Posted: Jan 13 2008, 07:04 PM


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QUOTE (Soran @ Yesterday at 12:28 PM)
This is made of epic win and hawtness

All hail the Divine God-Empress. Project D is finished, once and for all. Muahahahahaha....

um....did you even read it?
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Posted: Jan 13 2008, 10:12 PM


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QUOTE (Soran @ Jan 12 2008, 04:28 PM)
This is made of epic win and hawtness

All hail the Divine God-Empress. Project D is finished, once and for all. Muahahahahaha....

*Points and..............*
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