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[Meteor]

Hmm. Dai's aura flared up. This could mean trouble for Takumi.

[dark_hero_zero]

SE2 Chapter 6: Finish Line.

The night sky glowed bright white as both the Levin and Trueno raced through each corner. All was silent except for the engines and backfire coming from the cars as each passed the trees on the mountain. Another corner came up and both did a perfect drift through it. Inside the Levin, Dai sweated with anticipation of over-taking the Trueno. One little mess-up and that’s all he needed. Then Dai noticed the car slowing down more and more after each corner. “His tires are loosing grip! This is it!” Last corner came and the Levin drifted hard, almost touching the Trueno.
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(Few days later)

“Hey boss, I’m leaving now.” Dai carried his bag with one shoulder and moved out. Then a bright light came out of nowhere. Dai shielded with his arm and looked up.

“Hey Dai, what do you think? Pretty nice, am I right?” The person stepped out of the car and cried out with joy.

“It’s awesome! Where did you get it?” he asked as he looked around the cars white body.

“Found it for a bargain. So do you want to test it out on mount Akina or what?” He held the keys up and jingled them back and forth. Dai was already in the passenger seat ready for take off.

“Alright, show me what this baby’s got Itsuki-senpai!” Itsuki started the white Supra and both were off to mount Akina. The roar of the engine blasted through the city night.
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(Mount Myogi)

Shingo held up his right hand in the middle of the street.
3!
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Go!!!!!! The BNR32 roared out of the finish line with the Sil-eighty right behind it.
“Alright Mako lets show Nakazato what we got!” Mako nodded and drifted into the first corner of Myogi. Nakazato had requested to try out his new 32 on them to see how much was improved from his car with that tuning of Mr. Yamamato. He went through the corner at amazing speed with his grip technique. The blue Sil-eighty was right behind him and he grinned.

“Let’s see if you can handle this.” He shifted to fifth gear and pressed on the gas to go full power. The Skyline made a big margin between him and the Sil-eighty.

“That Skyline is fast. I guess we’re going to have to use the corners to catch up with this Skyline. Alright, grip here.” Mako did as she said and got a little closer to Nakazato on the corner.

“Seems to be a bit sluggish on the corners than the old tune, but I can manage.” Nakazato pressed on the gas again and the engine roared out onto the night.
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(Back at the starting line)

“His Skyline has really improved, his speed is way better than last time. Wonder if he can break the record?” Shingo slouched on his EG6 looking at the road ahead. He wondered where he got the parts from. He decided to ask him later. Right now, he would have to wait for the match to end.

This post has been edited by dark_hero_zero on Dec 12 2006, 09:32 PM

[dark_hero_zero]

SE2 Chapter 7: Strength of a thousand Skylines

The 32 moved through each corner only to have the Sil-eighty catch up to it. The Skyline powered through the corners of Myogi until the grand curve was in full view. Nakazato steadied the wheel before making a full wheel turn in his Skyline. The 32 skidded the assphalt on the floor. "What the?" Sayuki looked at the Skyline in disbelief. Nakazato was drifting his 32, something that wasn't Nakazato's style.

"What the hell?" Nakazato screamed as his Skyline did a four wheel drift through the grande curve. The 32 did a perfect drift out of the grande curve and dusted the Sil-eighty behind him.

"How is he accelerating at that speed?" Sayuki looked furious not being able to beat him. She looked at Mako who considerably knew also that they had lost the race. Both cars got back at the parking lot finding Shingo impatiently waiting and Mr.Yamamato resting on his skyline.

"Hey, you! This tune is for drifting!" He pointed at Mr. Yamamato with anger.

"Yeah so, what's the big deal?" He looked at Nakaazato for an answer.

"I know that I asked you to improve it, but not drifting. I dislike drifts. They're only for show!" Nakazato let his finger down, but not his gaze.

"Who cares if you dislike to drift? As long as you become better is what matters. The grip style was holding you back from reaching your true potential." He grinned at Nakazato. "The minute I saw your style on the mountain, I knew it was meant for drifting." Yamamato laughed out loud in the air while Nakazato took his words with wonder.
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(Next day, Gas Station)

Dai looked at the window in front of his face remembering the battle with Takumi. He had lost the race and was supposed to give up street racing. Then his dad changed his mind when he heard the Fujiwara name. Could their be any relation to them? Also why did he say I would have to work all the way out here? He looked around the gas station seeing nothing in particular. His dad had said something about finding something here, but what? Before he could get a closer look manager Iketani came in staring at Dai. "Why aren't you working? Get to work right now!" Iketani tried having a mean and serious face, but just couldn't help it to smile.

"Yes sir!" Dai ran out to help the next customer. Iketani walked about a few more finding Itsuki staring at his Supra. The way he was staring at it looked like he was too happy for words. He let him be, but a pay reduction was in order. Then a white 180sx came around the corner, as usual it was the lonely driver Kenji coming for his daily visit at the gas station.

"Iketani! I have some bad news."

"Yeah, what could be so bad?"

"A girl with a red Miata has challenged the speedstars."

"So...?"

"Sure I laughed at first, but this girl is really good. She drove so fast in mount Akina that I swear even Takumi would lose." Kenji breathed to catch his breath back, but Iketani was wondering about the driver. Could anyone drive that fast to beat even their friend Takumi. He doubted it, but he needed a closer look of her driving.

"Say Kenji, can we see her?" Iketani stared at his friend who had caught his breath.

"You don't need to look for her, she's right behind me." Kenji moved out of the way, Iketani got a view of the red Miata which was stock all over. A girl popped out of the car and walked up to Iketani. Then she pointed to Dai with determination.

"I want to race him!" Her eyes looked intent on not to change her mind, which Iketani looked with puzzlement. Why did she want Dai?

[-Jt-]

woah u've updated this quiete a lot, i've lsot interested in fan fictions because no1's read mine for ages, i just updated it a week ago too owell.

[dark_hero_zero]

SE2 Chapter 8: A Walk in the Touge

"Are you ready Dai?" Cole (Iketani) shouted. Dai put a thumbs up in the air and both took off into Mt.Akina. Dai remebered that girl from yesterday and her agressive voice that echoed through his head.
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(Yesterday)

"I want to race him!"

"Hold on, but he has never raced on Mt.Akina before." Iketani blocked her path, but she hastily shoved him away.

"Then get him prepared for the race. You got a week." and off she went into the street. Iketani looked at Dai with confusion. He wondered why she wanted to race Dai so badly, but decided to push that thought out of his head.

"Dai, we have to prepare you for this race."

"Wait a......" He couldn't finish his sentence. He was already being dragged in by Itsuki.
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(Present)

Dai looked at the S13 and Trueno in front of him. For now he was to follow them and watch carefully for the timing of Akina's turns. First corner of Akina was in view. Dai examined the corner, noticing a gutter on the left. He copied Iketani's timing, but a little earlier so he could reach the gutter. The Levin hooked on and passed the Trueno.

"He wasn't supposed know how to do that yet. His learning curve is just as fast as Takumi's." Iketani started to sweat a little, but quickly got his concentration back. "Even though he's pretty good, but I have the course knowledge." The next corner came in view and Iketani switched to second gear. Braking hard the S13 took the middle of the corner. Though it was a nice entrance Iketani still didn't know how to counter steer perfectly, resulting in having the Levin getting closer to the S13. Another turn came and soon the Levin was in front of the S13.

"Come on Iketani-senpai, how am I supposed to learn when I still can pass you?"

"Darn, I guess his skill is better than my course knowledge." Soon the radio was activated and Takumi's voice came up.

"Is it time for the real lesson."

"Alright go ahead Takumi." The S13 slowed down enabling the Trueno to pass with ease. Dai looked into the mirror seeing the aura around the AE86 Trueno.

"Alright show me what you got." Dai sped up only to notice the corner. "Crap!" The Levin braked hard, but it still understeered enough for the Trueno to pass.

"Way to go Takumi! You passed him with ease." Itsuki smiled with glee about the skill level of Takumi's. Ever since joining Project D he's been more talented than ever.

"Dai got careless. I noticed how the car shifted during the corner and it's definetly not his normal turning style." Yet again Takumi surprised Itsuki with his knowledge of racing. Sure he saw him do it before, but he also noticed something different in Takumi's voice. Something Itsuki couldn't explain without enough time. Unfortunately another corner came up and he soon felt the G-force of the car turning left. After a couple more corners he saw the ice skating rink sign and knew what was coming up.

"I've heard many amazing stories of the five consecutive hairpins of Akina. Let's see what they're really like."

[Meteor]

This fic's getting better.

[FinToy-83]

agreed.

I'll try to finish my huge chapter by the weekend.. but I'm moving to new apartment, so it might be delayed a bit more

[dark_hero_zero]

SE2 Chapter 9: FR VS 4WD

The first hairpin came in view. Takumi shifted down to third gear and braked. he turned early causing the his tires to hook onto the gutters.

"Amazing!" Dai breathed in and went for it. He hooked onto the gutter and was soon passing through the hairpin.

"No good" Takumi stared at the mirror.

"What are you talking............." Itsuki looked behind at the Levin spinning out. Dai had turned to early that he oversteered his car into a spin out. Takumi stopped the Trueno and sighed.

"We have more work to do."
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(Mt. Myogi)

Nakazato turned right drifting his newly tuned R32. Mr.Yamamoto's words stung his mind into internal grief. How could drifting ever be his specialty when his grip driving got him better times. Nakazato looked further onto the road to see Shingo holding a stop watch. He passed him and Shingo stopped the watch.

"Did it get any better?" Nakazato looked int the watch.

"Sorry, but your grip times were better." Shingo stared at Nakazato. Shingo wondered how long was he going to keep time attacking Mt. Myogi.

"Alright, another run." Nakazato walked back to his 32.

"What! Another run." It was getting late and Shingo wanted to get some sleep.

"I won't be satisfied until I beat my grip times." He stared at his 32. The real reason he wnted to keep running was to figure out how drifting was better for him. Then lights soon appeared in front of him. It was red 32, but instead of an R emblem on the back it was an S.

"HCR32?" The driver stepped out and walked in Nakazato's direction. He had long brown hair and blue eyes. His t-shirt was white with the words Lucky Man on it. His pants and shoes were both colored black.

"You wouldn't happen to be Nakazato of the Myogi Nightkids would you?"

"Yes that's me. Who's asking?"

"My name is Hojo Ikawa and I would like to join your team."

"Join my team is that it. Alright, let's see what you got." Nakazato looked at the red 32 and noticed something about the parts on it. WORK rims, nice new muffler, Bomex body kit and bucket seats. Something about him was odd though.

"So what do I have to do to prove myself?" Nakazato looked closely at the Skyline and sighed.

"How about you race me."

"Race you! Isn't that a little harsh for a test. Why don't I race your friend over there instead?" He pointed at Shingo.

"Hey! My name is Shingo and we're not friends!" Hojo backed away a little, but was suddenly called upon by Nakazato.

"That does sound like a good idea. Okay, your test will be to race Shingo on the downhill of Myogi." Nakazato nodded and waited for a reply.

"Alright that doesn't sound to hard." Hojo smiled and stared at Shingo. Shingo felt anger and had to make an uproar.

"You don't know who you messing with kid, but I'll show you not to mess with Shingo Shoji, the #2 driver of the Nightkids." Shingo started his EG6 and lined up at the start. Hojo followed and Nakazato started the countdown.
10..
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GO!!!!!!!!!!!!
Off they went into the night.

[FinToy-83]

uh oh.. I wonder if Shingo still likes to tap the bumper..

[dark_hero_zero]

SE2 Chapter 10: Theories

The HCR32 tailight's lit up in the dark as the EG6 followed through the twist and turns of Myogi. Through the darkness a dark figure appeared.

"Not bad, but nothing I can't handle." Shingo stepped on the brake with his left foot and shifted to third following the Skyline into the corner. As Shingo looked at the car turn right he noticed that a weird mark was on the skyline's side. Before getting a clear look a left turn came up. He pressed the gas knowingly that this corner was always hard for beginners on Myogi. As predicted the HCR32 skidded and went into the outside line.

"Oh no!" Hojo held the steering wheel hard left, but nothing could help stop his Skyline from skidding to the outside line. In an instant the red EG6 passed though him with ease.

"Typical beginner mistake, now all I have to do is leave you in the dust." Shingo laughed in the air and off he went with the lead.
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(On top of Mt. Myogi)

Nakazato rested in his car wondering about Mr. Yamamato's words. It him very stongly, yet he didn't know why. Lighting a cigarette he put it in his mouth and breathed out into the open window. Then he noticed a rain drop falling, then another. He gazed up into the sky and saw it was going to rain. While gazing and closing his mirror he thought about Hojo and wondered about his style. He used an FR skyline, maybe he could help him out with drifting. He decided to ask about it after the race. The engine roared out and slowly, but quick enough to go safely, he made his trip down Mt. Myogi.
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(In the middle of Myogi)

"Why can't I shake him off my bumper." Shingo grasped the wheel and coughed out a sign off trouble. The car behind him glued to him no matter what he did. He tried tricking him, but his front lights never dimmed away from Shingo's mirror. Then Shingo laughed in the air. "The last corner of downhill Myogi. The Grande Curve. No new racer could get through that corner without losing tons of speed or crashing into the cliff. This is my last chance to shake him. Here goes!" Shifting to third, left foot braking, and steering hard left. Into the corner they went. The Skyline passed the EG6. "No way!" Shingo stopped his car in the middle of the road as Hojo took off into the night.
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(Mt. Akagi)

Time ran down a stop watch as Keisuke did his normal run. Kenta on top of Mt. Akagi switched off watching for Keisuke-san's FD and the time in his watch. The FD backfired out of the last uphill corner of Akagi and headed into Kenta's direction. Kenta clicked on the stop watch and read a 2'36'852.

"So Kenta how'd I do?" Keisuke got out of his car and put his hood up for the rain.

"A little better, but there is still room for improvement." Kenta said knowling that he couldn't even get a time close to Keisuke's.

"That's it for today. Let's head down." Then a loud noise came from the right revealing a white FD with the sticker Sons of Victory on it. The FD parked next to Keisuke and out came the driver. He looked about the same age as Ryosuke or a little older. He looked remarkably similair to Keisuke except for the fact his hair was red and his expression was more calm than Keisuke's.

"Excuse me you two, but you wouldn't happen to know where I get a hold of Ryosuke Takahashi would you?" At the time he said Ryosuke he grinned slightly and then returned to his normal smile.

"What do you want with my brother?" Keisuke sensed something bad was going to happen, but didn't know what it was so he kept his composure for the moment.

"Oh so you're the younger Takahashi! Well that makes the whole thing even better. Names Katsu Nomora, tell him I want a race down Mt. Akagi this Saturday, that's pretty much it."

"My brother is a pretty busy guy, he might not be able to race you." Keisuke felt a little fear for this new guy. Something in him felt that he wasn't an ordinay fellow.

"Is that so, that makes me so disappointed. Wait, if he can't race then how about I racd you instead, right here ,right now. Being the brother of such a great racer must mean you inherited some his racing skills." He stared at Keisuke with the eyes of craveing.

"Sorry, but no. Maybe later." Keisuke got into his car and drove away wanting to get away from the guy. Kenta also got into his S14 and drove off following Keisuke. Then a roar from behind them was heard and then the white FD appeared behind them. It flashed twice saying a challenge. "You just don't know when to quit do you? If you're that dam impatient then bring it on!" Keisuke flashed his hazard lights twice. Kenta got what Keisuke was saying and all three floored into Mt. Akagi's dangerous corners.

This post has been edited by dark_hero_zero on Feb 5 2007, 11:51 PM

[dark_hero_zero]

SE2 Chapter 11: Enter a White Rose

The orange and red leaves fell to the ground as Kai rested in his MR2's bucket seat. It has been almost a year since his defeat against Fujiwara. He thought about the key parts of battle. Following close behind the AE86, Passing him by using the 33rd corner of Iro, and finally the daring jump on the 3rd bridge. Then he glared out the window watching some Evo 4's take on the turns and twists of Iro. The Emperors have been training hard ever since Kyouchi's defeat on Iro. Kai grinned at the fact to losing to such an outdated car, but that made it kinda less disappointing to lose. Then the loud noise of a mis-fire echoed through the air. A black and recognizable Evo 3 came out of the night. Kai stared at the driver inside, Kyouchi Sudo, the leader of the Emperors. A few days ago Kai had set a challenge to him for a race down Iro. Kyouchi quickly agreed to it and commented that he's been waiting for this race. When that Evo turned, both made eye contact to each other. This race was inevitable. Then a knock at the window suddenly came from his left. He stared up to see a young, blonde, and ordinary girl staring back. Kai rolled down the window.

"You wouldn't happen to be Kai Kogishwa?"

"Yes, that's me."

"Can you teach me how to drift?"
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(Gas Station)

"Dai!! Get up!!" Itsuki slammed the desk and like a jack in the box Dai stood up.

"I'm sorry Itsuki-senpai. I'll get back to work!" Out the door he ran for the next customer. Itsuki smirked at the word senpai. It was like he was finally respected for something. All those girls and the AE85 never brought him any good, but hearing senpai brought out pride in him. Then something grabbed him from behind and put him in a choke hold.

"What are you doing slacking off Itsuki?" It turned out to be just Iketani. He let him go and off Itsuki went to help Dai. Iketani laughed out loud till he heard a voice beind him.

"Get back to work!" In an instant he ran through the front doors. Yuichi sighed and went on the couch lighting a cigarette. The bell of the front door rang and in reflex Yuichi looked up.

"Hand me a cigarette."

"Bunta, how you been? What brings you here?" Granting his order he gave a cigarette to Bunta and lit it.

"Nothing really just stopping by to say hi."

"Is that so, how's Takumi doing? Is he going to surpass you soon?"

"Not in a long shot, oh that reminds me how's that new kid?"

"You mean Daisuke, right? He's been good so far. Also he's pretty good at the wheel of his Levin."

"Really, where is the kid?"

"Over there." Yuichi pointed at Dai who was washing a Mercedes Benz. Bunta got up and waved goodbye.

"See you later Yuichi. Also I got some new parts for the GC8V, want to test it out with me?"

"Sorry I got something to do." Bunta left after that. Yuichi rested on the couch slumping. He knew what Bunta's driving was like in the AE86, but he didn't even want to imagine what it was like in the GC8V.
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(Takahashi residence)

As usual the older Takahashi was typing on his computer swiftly, ever stopping to stare out the window. Thunder roared as the rain fell from the sky. Ryosuke typed on his laptop making the report about both the FD and AE86. Suddenly his younger busted in.

"So how was the time attacks on Mt. Akagi?"

"Pretty good, but there was this guy with an FD spirit." Suddenly Ryosuke stopped typing. "He requested a challenge to you this Saturday, but I said you were busy. Then he chased us asking for a race down Mt. Akagi." Ryosuke turned around and gazed at Keisuke for more of the story. "He was really good."

"You lost didn't you."

"Wait how did you know!? Well it doesn't matter anyway, I was caught off guard. Next time I'll beat him!" After those words Ryosuke stood up and walked out the door.

"Where are you going?" Keisuke looked at him with puzzlement.

"Don't worry, I'll be back soon," and off he went out the door. Starting his FC, he turned around and drove off.

This post has been edited by dark_hero_zero on Feb 15 2007, 08:36 PM

[Meteor]

Another good chapter. Looking forward to the next.

[dark_hero_zero]

SE2 Chapter 12: Sacrifice

"Are you ready Dai?" Iketani said with worry. Dai sipped on the water and sighed with satisfaction.

"Are you kidding me Iketani-senpai. I've never been so pumped up in my life." Dai started to grin, but a noise made him look the other way. A red Roadster came from the clearing followed by two other cars. One was a white FD and the other a black 180sx. The cars parked in the middle of the street and out came the drivers. The girl came straight to Dai and glared at him.

"Are you going to stare at me all day or are you going to get your car ready?" She went back to her Roadster and went on the starting line. Dai hurriedly went to his car and did the same as her.

"I'll be doing the countdown." The guy from the white FD got up and went between the cars.
10
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1 Go!!!!!!!
Both cars went out at amazing speed. In the midst of this, Takumi who was in the crowd stared at the guy from the white FD. While that was happening, Itsuki managed to see his best friends glare.

"What's wrong?" Itsuki asked. Takumi looked at Itsuki, but quickly went back to glaring.

"That guy over there. I know him from somewhere."
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(First corner of Akina)

Dai took the lead during the start up and went on to the first corner. Shifting to third and doing the heel and toe technique he drifted. The tires screeched loudly as he held on to the steering wheel trying to control the drift. Then for a moment he stared back at the Roadster. The Roadster came closer and when the first corner was done they were side by side.

"How did she do that?" Dai flashbacked all the practice runs he had on Akina and he knew he was taking the best speed and line. Before he could think another corner came up. Doing what he practiced he braked a little and turned. The Roadster did the same and yet it went faster. Now he was behind her.

"What's going wrong?" Dai's face started to sweat.
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(Third corner)

"Well its been a long time since I got to watch a race from another mountain other than Mt. Hakone." Akio smiled and sat on his Fairlady Z. He watched as both cars went through the third corner of Akina. As he watched he noticed how the red Levin was losing ground. Then he looked at the way the Levin was rumbling. He sighed and went into his car. "That Levins to going to die."
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(Inside the Levin)

Dai struggled to keep up with the Roadster, but no matter what he tried it kept going farther. Then a sudden rumble was heard from the engine. The car kept rumbling till he heard the sound of something break. then he saw the tach-o-meter start to fall. The car started to shake around, but Dai took control of it. After some slowing down the Levin went to a complete stop. Dai opened the hood and saw the mess to behold. The engine exploded. He stared down in disgrace for not seeing this was going to happen earlier. Then he heard a voice behind him.

"You're pretty pathetic to be called a racer." It was the girl from the Roadster. Dai had nothing to say to the compliment. "Come on, lets get that peice of junk down this mountain." She called for her two teammates and soon enough his Levin was out of Mount Akina. Dai sat down in the parking lot at the base of the mountain with the lonely driver gang. He scoffed at his bad judgement, but knew their was nothing he could do except call in his insurance on the car. He watched as his car was being towed away to the autoshop.

"Don't worry Dai. I'm sure your car is going to be fine." Itsuki smiled at him, but it had no effect.

"Stop slouching so much! This race isn't over you know." Dai stared at the opponent in front of him. "When we race again I want to give me your best out there. Is that clear?" She stared at him for the answer.

"Sure." His face started to smile for some reason.

"Good we got that through." She started to walk away.

"Wait!" Dai shouted. "I don't even know my opponents name yet." She stopped.

"It's Sakura Suzaki." and then she went on her merry little way.
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(Iro)

Kai stared up at the leaves as they fell down. Then he faced the street. Lights flashed by and he saw a white MR-S. Out came his apprentice who was girl named Ume Kanzaki.

"Sorry I'm late." She went up to Kai with a smile.

"No its only a minute late." Kai stared her smile and sweat dropped down his face.

"So teach me something." She went off to her car and patted it.

"Oh well lets start with something basic. I guess we can start with the E-brake drift." He showed her the what to do and how it worked. She did the same as he and started her car. "Wait, are you sure you should test drive it now."

"Why not?"

"Well...." Before he could finish the sentence she was on her way. She did the move to spin in a 360, but instead she did a 450. Kai sighed and went on to the
MR-S. "We have a lot of work to do." He stared inside to see that she got dizzy during the spin. Kai left out a laugh. He remembered the kart days and how he would screw up at first.

"Wow its harder than it looks." Ume got out of her dizziness. Kai couldn't help,but let out another chuckle.

This post has been edited by dark_hero_zero on Mar 12 2007, 10:56 PM