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> [FANFIC] On the Unbeaten Path - Chapter 25, Hard Reset
Posted: May 14 2012, 01:22 PM

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Truly great comeback, very intense and complete chapter, I really enjoyed reading it smile.gif. Though taking into account the time gap I guess I won't be able to avoid rereading the whole fic from the beginning.
Posted: May 14 2012, 01:42 PM

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^Speaking of which, I should get around to rereading the middle parts as well. Also, welcome back wing_0.

P.S: Demon Boost, There was a typo I missed. I edited it into the last post shortly after you'd already made your edits so it's still there in the chapter. Could've pointed it out sooner I guess, but anyway, now I've pointed it out.
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Posted: Nov 22 2014, 08:43 PM

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>tmw read this chapter
>the feels
> feels intensifies
>sobbing uncontrollably

Damn did you really have to make this chapter so emotional? Not like it's poorly written -- far from it. I felt like everyones emotions were being channeled through me. UGH THE FEELS
for everyones sake please write more frequently.

10/10 would recommend
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Posted: Dec 2 2014, 12:08 PM

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Great revival! I especially liked the pacing of the end section and the flashbacks after Takumi leaves for the hospital, that was very dynamic and engaging smile.gif Keep it up!

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