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> [FANFIC] Initial D: Heikou Sen Pass FIVE, Of Foreign Friends or Foes
Nomake Wan
Posted: Oct 17 2008, 03:37 AM


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I just finished the editing work on Chapter 2, which to be honest, I enjoyed. It lost me a bit near the end because I don't know a damn thing about bikes, but it kept my attention enough to be enjoyable. Not to mention, Ciel is just such a wonderful character to have. Not particularly important, but a delicious dose of comedic relief. That, and the whole thing about completely changing the direction of the Initial D storyline from the beginning is an amazing concept which really deserves the exploration it's getting from Heikou Sen.

Now then. On with the posting, shall we?
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Posted: Oct 17 2008, 05:43 AM


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The wait was entirely worth it. That is all.

There was a little formatting error in the FD VS bike battle though. At one point, both Keisuke's thoughts and the narration were in italics.
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Not bad, not bad...
Considering you BUGGED and BUGGED me to read it.. *blush* in that certain way you did.. *cough* t..tonikaku.. It's an awesome read, and I can't wait for more HeiSen to be written.. it's such a flow of satisfaction, like a scent from the past that one yearns for.. You did a good job, Reiji-sama. <3


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Y..you're lucky I felt it was necessary to post after such a long time. Damn lucky. Don't get used to it.
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Posted: Oct 17 2008, 12:27 PM


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Dang, it sure took the two of you a bit... but I'm glad it's out ^^ I see some interesting character development here (Nakazato), and bikes are quite an interesting idea. The race scene's pretty well done too. As for the biker... I sure wonder where the heck did I here that name at... XD

Btw, Shingo and an iPhone? I think he'd wreck it in no time, but well... your choice. tongue.gif
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Posted: Oct 17 2008, 02:32 PM


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The delay was my fault, and I honestly didn't check the BBCODE tags as carefully as I should have. Glad it was fixed.
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Excellent update, Dori!

Now only if I could get my fics back up & running; I just lost the files for both like a week ago.

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QUOTE (Midnight Drifter @ Yesterday at 4:04 PM)
Here's a sneak preview of the next car to appear in the fanfic.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4w4Ep2LgoYU

.....Ooooh...

I think me likeys.. <3
But... in Japan?? *grin*
This is going.. to be EPIC.
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Posted: Dec 27 2008, 08:32 AM


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^Seconded

[GRATUITOUS JAPANESE]SUGOI! KORE WO KUDASAI![/GRATUITOUS JAPANESE]

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That's one nice cover for the next chapter. Did you make it?

I sure hope this great story gets updated soon.
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does not seem as bad history but it is as if something is missing for the rest is perfect
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I made the cover, actually..
I'd like to do better, but Im still waiting on Drifter to find his muse and his manuscript. ^^;;
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post another chapter!!! omfgggg
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I was looking forward to a new chapter when I saw a new post in this thread. . .

But anyway; sincerely seconded. It's been a long time, and I'd really like to see more chapters.
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Perfectly done.[/post]
Though I should say more, I guess.
This one had me deep into the story as much as On The Unbeaten Path, and had me begging for more by the end. WHY U DO DIS TO US DRIFTA???
Anyway, the writing followed the feel of Initial D surprisingly well, considering how distant it was in other stories such as Unbeaten Path.
Just another amazing story that I could never put down, so to speak.

Also this made me LOL:

QUOTE (Nomake)
f**king agreed. If you pull that bullshit one more time, I swear to god I'll never read anything you write until the end of time.
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Posted: Mar 18 2010, 12:54 PM


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....OH MY GODDDDDDDDDDDD

YOU MOTHERFU--- AUUUGHHH!!!
I can't even remember when I drew that damned chapter illustration!! Drifter, you jerk!! POST ANOTHER CHAPTER, YOU ASS!!! T_T
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Well, not to bash on the proofreader, but I spy 1 typo and 1 grammar error. tongue.gif

Now, on to the story - Hai!Book? Tougeville?! I ROFFLED SO HARD XD XD XD Well, I guess it's the next step up to playing Solitaire or MaJongg. tongue.gif
All in all, it was well written and a very nice surprise for having waited OVER A YEAR FOR ONE STINKIN' CHAPTER. I enjoyed it, a good read. Wanna know more about the mystery behind the 86, I like the new character Miyuki [although I definitely want to draw a ver.2 to that horrendous-looking chapter art. ugh!] and lolPrius. Just lol. XD
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QUOTE (Kogal Moon @ 5 hours, 40 minutes ago)
Well, not to bash on the proofreader, but I spy 1 typo and 1 grammar error. tongue.gif

CBF re-reading the whole thing, where are they? pinch2.gif

EDIT: Nevermind, got it. Argh, right at the end. Balls.

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Both at the end, but I already pointed that out over IMs. Drifter will fix it when he gets home. tongue.gif
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Woah, it's alive! Nice update, I like the pacing. Miyuki's a pretty interesting character and the way Nakazato acts around her is pretty funny ^^. I don't exactly understand why Miyuki called Nakazato "Takahashi" and why he didn't react to that ermm2.gif. Keep it up and hopefully ch4 will come in less than a year tongue.gif.
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Uh... I recall reading this in ffn.net for awhile. The name 'Suzaki' kept grating into my nerves, so I went on and read other fics. Other than that one thing, it's actually pretty good. Better than all those high school AUs. Keep it coming!

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