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> [FANFIC] On the Unbeaten Path - Chapter 25, Hard Reset
Rudy
  Posted: Jun 13 2006, 01:20 PM


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Nice Job Dori, I really enjoyed the read. You should put in some dashes or something to seperate the perspectives? though I first thought the second Paragraph was an observation of Takumi's.
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Posted: Jun 13 2006, 01:41 PM


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Nice fanfic... It is surprisingly not filled with what you expect out of an Initial D fanfic...
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Posted: Jun 13 2006, 04:32 PM


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For some reason I'm reminded of Capeta more than Initial D, but that's cool in my books.
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Dude thats like wow....just wow. AWSOME!.
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gah! I give up on reading lol, but nice story there XD
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Nice, I knew it was a Starion because you like 80's imports FR and the low redline, had to be the 2.6 .
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holy crap *swoon*
I wanna drive Akiyuki's car now!!! ohmy.gif
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Posted: Jun 14 2006, 08:00 PM


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if i could FIND a starion to buy here than i would drive one....
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Posted: Jun 15 2006, 01:33 AM


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Holy crap... that story is insane! tongue.gif In a good way of course.#

I say you send that to S.S and ask for an opinion, that story would make a great episode.
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I'm curious to what kind of "unorthodox" tuning is under the hood.

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Posted: Jun 15 2006, 02:19 PM


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nice fanfic!
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QUOTE (Midnight Dorifuta @ Jun 14 2006, 08:10 PM)
"What's the matter?", Akiyuki asked, him eyeing fujiwara almost the way Takumi blankly stared at the tachometer.

"There's no speedometer...", Takumi said, not being able to make out any speedometer dial anywhere. He also noticed the tachometer only reached 8,000 RPM, and there was no marked redline. "...and the tach doesn't have a redline."

Akiyuki chuckled a little harder than usual to just how Takumi was thrown off by the only mildly unorthodox interior. He pointed his index finger at a small rectangular LCD display that was currently blank, showing no reading of anything. "Turn the key and start the engine", Akiyuki said, obviously already knowing what the display was for. Takumi followed suit, and after flashing '888' for a few seconds on the screen, a '0' appeared on the green backlit display, and below that, black text, that read 'km/h'.

"There's your speedometer...", he finally said as Takumi blinked, before pressing a small black button next to it, the 'km/h' switching to 'MPH', the unit now ready to read in imperial units. He switched it back to the kph reading before pointing slightly up and left to the tachometer, at a small reflective circle - perhaps a display light - and explaining the answer to Takumi's second question. "...and there's your red line, sort to speak. It lights up at the desired shift point and flashes rapidly when the engine speed is critical."

sounds like a ricer, but that's what I think. dry.gif
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man, he looks like a BADASS. I'm really digging this fan fic.
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Some sentences sound awkward, but other than that this is a whole lot better than the fics i've read on FF.net. I'm impressed with the technical detail you've put into the fic, just make sure not to go overboard with the techie stuff or that'll lead to your downfall. happy.gif

Kudos to you pal

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Posted: Jun 21 2006, 01:37 AM


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QUOTE (Midnight Dorifuta @ Yesterday at 2:08 PM)
"...you're missing the point."

blink.gif And I do to.

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QUOTE (Midnight Dorifuta @ Yesterday at 10:27 PM)
Thanks aplenty. ^-^

Don't worry about technical stuff, as the story goes along, everything will be explained in detail, so people don't get lost. :3

That's a bit too late. blink.gif

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