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caos950042 | Posted: Jul 17 2006, 03:14 AM | ||
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Ok. Rephrase: It must be hard for him to concentrate with his co-pilot's seatbelt between her playboy-like bust. | ||
FinToy-83 | Posted: Jul 17 2006, 03:38 PM |
IDW Banned Member Group: Banned Posts: 2,975 Member No.: 14,568 Joined: Nov 24th 2005 Location: Varkaus, Finland | and next thing in this marvelous fanfic will be.. hmm.. modified Veyron, perhaps? yes, I like this story, but these top speeds are starting to eat off the realism that was created by the modifications.. |
Nomake Wan | Posted: Jul 17 2006, 06:08 PM |
ShiMACHaze Group: Advanced Members Posts: 19,542 Member No.: 5,394 Joined: Feb 5th 2005 Location: Drydock | Top speeds = a little crazy, indeed. And I didn't mean drop the tech stuff, just... tone it down a bit. Like, have a little more story than the specific parts and stuff. I dunno. Anyway, keep up the great writing, Dori. ^-^ |
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Levin_86 | Posted: Jul 18 2006, 10:42 PM |
underpowered Alliance leader Group: Advanced Members Posts: 1,170 Member No.: 17,990 Joined: May 25th 2006 Location: Update Profile | always a pleasure to read ur story.... nice... |
Rudy | Posted: Jul 19 2006, 12:23 AM |
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caos950042 | Posted: Jul 19 2006, 03:08 AM |
~A grunt in the Game called Life~ Group: Advanced Members Posts: 616 Member No.: 14,415 Joined: Nov 14th 2005 Location: Update Profile | Still no Kasumi? Shouldn't it be that Wataru aslo came along for some blood and gore? |
?wha? | Posted: Jul 19 2006, 04:41 AM |
In sexy black'n gold :D Group: Advanced Members Posts: 2,254 Member No.: 5,914 Joined: Mar 2nd 2005 Location: Sydney Australia | man i understand the need for a spoiler tag.... well done on the 85-86 convo and the FC vs evoIII race! |
Taku_E70 | Posted: Jul 19 2006, 05:17 AM |
IDW Prime Member Group: Advanced Members Posts: 706 Member No.: 6,100 Joined: Mar 10th 2005 Location: Update Profile | Woo go Itsuki ;] Good thing you had the Spolier tag. |
WRX3288 | Posted: Jul 19 2006, 09:14 AM |
IDW Supremo Member Group: Advanced Members Posts: 784 Member No.: 9,746 Joined: Jul 5th 2005 Location: New Jersey | Itsuki is now offically badass. lol I cant wait to see how the ryosuke and Kyoichi race turns out. |
Nomake Wan | Posted: Jul 19 2006, 04:40 PM |
ShiMACHaze Group: Advanced Members Posts: 19,542 Member No.: 5,394 Joined: Feb 5th 2005 Location: Drydock | Okay, I had to read the spoiler part just to make sure that it could be posted--because despite hiding it, well... you know. It's acceptable in that it doesn't say anything explicit, but I have to admit--creepy. Very scary delivery, Dori. And this lead me to finish reading the chapter. And I have to say. Itsuki... you are my hero. Bad. Ass. |
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EA11R | Posted: Jul 19 2006, 05:38 PM |
coffee break anyone? Group: Advanced Members Posts: 508 Member No.: 15,978 Joined: Feb 17th 2006 Location: Palmdale, CA | okay, that's it. I'm unsubscribing from Angel of Akina. there is only room for one fanfic in my heart. this is the single best fanfic I have ever seen. though i stil lsee lots o ferrors lik ethis. also, I have two questions. In the partwhere Itsuki's AE85 is being built up, it lists two spiolers. Is it like the option C AE86 in IDAS? and in Ch 11, in the race, does ryosuke misjudge the evo's lack of VCD? Great, great fanfic though. It is reaching the ideal amount of tecnical terms in the story--not so much that you end up skipping paragraphs, not so little that it seems vague and amatuerish. also, it's cool that I can identify 99% of the parts in the last 2 chapters, whereas I am usually lost. Amazing fanfic, keep up the good work! |
Rudy | Posted: Jul 19 2006, 10:09 PM |
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Nomake Wan | Posted: Jul 20 2006, 10:33 PM |
ShiMACHaze Group: Advanced Members Posts: 19,542 Member No.: 5,394 Joined: Feb 5th 2005 Location: Drydock | XP Eventually? Dude, the plan was you'd send me the chapters before you post them. So like, they'd be without errors the first time 'round. Heh. But I guess I can edit what's already here too. |
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eighty_D | Posted: Jul 20 2006, 10:38 PM |
lv.23 lurker Group: Advanced Members Posts: 1,107 Member No.: 15,593 Joined: Jan 26th 2006 Location: Fairbanks, AK | Itsuki is actually cool in this and is Kenji finally going to get a job? Good shtuff the rape scene was pretty crazy adds some drama to the story. Keep 'em coming |
nikos | Posted: Jul 21 2006, 02:33 AM | ||
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^ Holly Crap!! Itsuki is within 15 seconds of Takumi´s record time attack?! ........>______________________SH*T!_______________________<........ Whit the his new config. in the trueno , how far can he go??!!!! (idea: why not make a Akina pass-by againts a EVO? would love to see Itsuki in action!) OK ... he did get action in that last part of the chapter! I just didn´t understand what he did againts that jerk? did he "slam" his precious car? Road-Kill?! ------ OH!MY PRECIOUS PAINT JOB! ------ | ||
Hannah | Posted: Jul 21 2006, 07:06 AM |
Remember Me Group: PONY FANATIC Posts: 2,243 Member No.: 8,296 Joined: Jun 19th 2005 Location: Update Profile | *swoon* Best chapter so far!! Itsuki, you're my hero!! XD XD |
Nomake Wan | Posted: Jul 21 2006, 10:13 AM |
ShiMACHaze Group: Advanced Members Posts: 19,542 Member No.: 5,394 Joined: Feb 5th 2005 Location: Drydock | They weren't in his car, I didn't think... they were in an alleyway... in which case, he probably just took the nearest piece of metal (pipe? roof sheet?) and slammed it against that dude's head. And 15 seconds... well... XD;; |
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Rudy | Posted: Jul 21 2006, 08:14 PM |
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Thai-kun | Posted: Jul 21 2006, 08:29 PM |
IDW Goldmember Group: Advanced Members Posts: 1,189 Member No.: 10,643 Joined: Jul 27th 2005 Location: Update Profile | amazing...I love this fanfiction...'s the only thing I've actually looked foreward to reading...bravo Dori, keep it coming |
tivx | Posted: Jul 21 2006, 10:23 PM |
IDW Prime Member Group: Advanced Members Posts: 1,967 Member No.: 1,600 Joined: Apr 8th 2004 Location: that city in that one state above that other state | damn i love this fanfic. sux about how ryosuke lost but sucks more about what happened to kasumi anyways keep up the good work Midnight Dorifuta |
Ekaros | Posted: Jul 22 2006, 06:07 AM |
IDW Member Group: Members Posts: 28 Member No.: 16,856 Joined: Mar 25th 2006 Location: Universe, Milkyway, Sol, Tellus, Europe, Finland | Hmm, prety intresting. And it's not too bad that Ryosuke lost. |
WRX3288 | Posted: Jul 22 2006, 09:48 PM |
IDW Supremo Member Group: Advanced Members Posts: 784 Member No.: 9,746 Joined: Jul 5th 2005 Location: New Jersey | WOW, now thats deep. |
caos950042 | Posted: Jul 23 2006, 07:08 PM |
~A grunt in the Game called Life~ Group: Advanced Members Posts: 616 Member No.: 14,415 Joined: Nov 14th 2005 Location: Update Profile | Inconsistency: The Evo III was leading, not the RX-7. Unless they finished one lap. BTW, Kasumi somewhat looks like a combination of Squall and Rinoa from FF8. This post has been edited by caos950042 on Jul 23 2006, 07:08 PM |
nikos | Posted: Jul 24 2006, 03:39 AM |
IDW Regular Member Group: Members Posts: 210 Member No.: 15,234 Joined: Jan 4th 2006 Location: Update Profile | I have to say that If i was in Wataru´s place, I would not allow anyone to touch my little sister, or even allow anyone to take her anywere. I would snap and kick that rapist ass ´till he was bleeding form every hole he has in his body, and at the end B*tch Slap him before giving him to the authorities. Good Fan Fic, by the way. Keep the good work. P.S.- Why not give a new car to Ryousuke, or maybe an upgrade? that would be interesting... |
EA11R | Posted: Jul 24 2006, 07:35 PM | ||||
coffee break anyone? Group: Advanced Members Posts: 508 Member No.: 15,978 Joined: Feb 17th 2006 Location: Palmdale, CA |
does the "Sht.X_X" mean you're cursing to yourself about your error or does it mean that you're saying I'm full of it because there is only one spoiler and I'm on LSD? Edit:150th post! why is it that everything is more important when it can be divided by fifty? This post has been edited by abused85 on Jul 24 2006, 07:37 PM | ||||
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