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Ok. Rephrase: It must be hard for him to concentrate with his co-pilot's seatbelt between her playboy-like bust.

and next thing in this marvelous fanfic will be.. hmm.. modified Veyron, perhaps? yes, I like this story, but these top speeds are starting to eat off the realism that was created by the modifications..

Top speeds = a little crazy, indeed.

And I didn't mean drop the tech stuff, just... tone it down a bit. Like, have a little more story than the specific parts and stuff. I dunno.

Anyway, keep up the great writing, Dori. ^-^

always a pleasure to read ur story.... nice...

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This post has been edited by Midnight Dorifuta on Jul 21 2006, 06:32 PM

Still no Kasumi?

Shouldn't it be that Wataru aslo came along for some blood and gore?

man i understand the need for a spoiler tag....

well done on the 85-86 convo and the FC vs evoIII race!

Woo go Itsuki ;]

Good thing you had the Spolier tag.

Itsuki is now offically badass. lol

I cant wait to see how the ryosuke and Kyoichi race turns out.

Okay, I had to read the spoiler part just to make sure that it could be posted--because despite hiding it, well... you know. It's acceptable in that it doesn't say anything explicit, but I have to admit--creepy. Very scary delivery, Dori.

And this lead me to finish reading the chapter.

And I have to say.

Itsuki... you are my hero. Bad. Ass.

okay, that's it. I'm unsubscribing from Angel of Akina. there is only room for one fanfic in my heart. this is the single best fanfic I have ever seen. though i stil lsee lots o ferrors lik ethis.
also, I have two questions. In the partwhere Itsuki's AE85 is being built up, it lists two spiolers. Is it like the option C AE86 in IDAS? and in Ch 11, in the race, does ryosuke misjudge the evo's lack of VCD?
Great, great fanfic though. It is reaching the ideal amount of tecnical terms in the story--not so much that you end up skipping paragraphs, not so little that it seems vague and amatuerish. also, it's cool that I can identify 99% of the parts in the last 2 chapters, whereas I am usually lost.
Amazing fanfic, keep up the good work!

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XP Eventually? Dude, the plan was you'd send me the chapters before you post them. So like, they'd be without errors the first time 'round. Heh.

But I guess I can edit what's already here too.

Itsuki is actually cool in this and is Kenji finally going to get a job? Good shtuff the rape scene was pretty crazy adds some drama to the story. Keep 'em coming

^ Holly Crap!!



Itsuki is within 15 seconds of Takumi´s record time attack?!
........>______________________SH*T!_______________________<........





Whit the his new config. in the trueno , how far can he go??!!!!

(idea: why not make a Akina pass-by againts a EVO? would love to see Itsuki in action!)


OK ... he did get action in that last part of the chapter!

I just didn´t understand what he did againts that jerk? did he "slam" his precious car? Road-Kill?!

------ OH!MY PRECIOUS PAINT JOB! ------

*swoon* Best chapter so far!!
Itsuki, you're my hero!! XD XD

They weren't in his car, I didn't think... they were in an alleyway... in which case, he probably just took the nearest piece of metal (pipe? roof sheet?) and slammed it against that dude's head.

And 15 seconds... well... XD;;

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This post has been edited by Midnight Dorifuta on Jul 24 2006, 07:01 PM

amazing...I love this fanfiction...'s the only thing I've actually looked foreward to reading...bravo Dori, keep it coming

damn i love this fanfic. sux about how ryosuke lost but sucks more about what happened to kasumi anyways keep up the good work Midnight Dorifuta

Hmm, prety intresting. And it's not too bad that Ryosuke lost.

WOW, now thats deep.

Inconsistency: The Evo III was leading, not the RX-7. Unless they finished one lap.

BTW, Kasumi somewhat looks like a combination of Squall and Rinoa from FF8.

This post has been edited by caos950042 on Jul 23 2006, 07:08 PM

I have to say that If i was in Wataru´s place, I would not allow anyone to touch my little sister, or even allow anyone to take her anywere.

I would snap and kick that rapist ass ´till he was bleeding form every hole he has in his body, and at the end B*tch Slap him before giving him to the authorities.



Good Fan Fic, by the way.
Keep the good work.


P.S.- Why not give a new car to Ryousuke, or maybe an upgrade? that would be interesting...

And I listed the reborn 86 having two? Sht. X_X

does the "Sht.X_X" mean you're cursing to yourself about your error or does it mean that you're saying I'm full of it because there is only one spoiler and I'm on LSD?

Edit:150th post! why is it that everything is more important when it can be divided by fifty?

This post has been edited by abused85 on Jul 24 2006, 07:37 PM