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Nomake Wan | Posted: Oct 17 2008, 03:37 AM |
ShiMACHaze ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Advanced Members Posts: 19,542 Member No.: 5,394 Joined: Feb 5th 2005 Location: Drydock ![]() | I just finished the editing work on Chapter 2, which to be honest, I enjoyed. It lost me a bit near the end because I don't know a damn thing about bikes, but it kept my attention enough to be enjoyable. Not to mention, Ciel is just such a wonderful character to have. Not particularly important, but a delicious dose of comedic relief. That, and the whole thing about completely changing the direction of the Initial D storyline from the beginning is an amazing concept which really deserves the exploration it's getting from Heikou Sen. Now then. On with the posting, shall we? |
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Meteor | Posted: Oct 17 2008, 05:43 AM |
Were you expecting something else? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Advanced Members Posts: 3,921 Member No.: 20,929 Joined: Oct 14th 2006 Location: Some place in South-East Asia ![]() | The wait was entirely worth it. That is all. There was a little formatting error in the FD VS bike battle though. At one point, both Keisuke's thoughts and the narration were in italics. |
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Hannah | Posted: Oct 17 2008, 09:43 AM |
Remember Me ![]() Group: PONY FANATIC Posts: 2,243 Member No.: 8,296 Joined: Jun 19th 2005 Location: Update Profile ![]() | Not bad, not bad... Considering you BUGGED and BUGGED me to read it.. *blush* in that certain way you did.. *cough* t..tonikaku.. It's an awesome read, and I can't wait for more HeiSen to be written.. it's such a flow of satisfaction, like a scent from the past that one yearns for.. You did a good job, Reiji-sama. <3 >.> Y..you're lucky I felt it was necessary to post after such a long time. Damn lucky. Don't get used to it. |
wing_0 | Posted: Oct 17 2008, 12:27 PM |
IDW Expert Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 126 Member No.: 24,095 Joined: Apr 21st 2007 Location: That Poland place ![]() | Dang, it sure took the two of you a bit... but I'm glad it's out ^^ I see some interesting character development here (Nakazato), and bikes are quite an interesting idea. The race scene's pretty well done too. As for the biker... I sure wonder where the heck did I here that name at... XD Btw, Shingo and an iPhone? I think he'd wreck it in no time, but well... your choice. ![]() |
Nomake Wan | Posted: Oct 17 2008, 02:32 PM |
ShiMACHaze ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Advanced Members Posts: 19,542 Member No.: 5,394 Joined: Feb 5th 2005 Location: Drydock ![]() | The delay was my fault, and I honestly didn't check the BBCODE tags as carefully as I should have. Glad it was fixed. |
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Drew | Posted: Oct 17 2008, 03:13 PM |
Bought not Built ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Advanced Members Posts: 3,941 Member No.: 12,733 Joined: Sep 23rd 2005 Location: Driving through the night, down the hills... ![]() | Excellent update, Dori! Now only if I could get my fics back up & running; I just lost the files for both like a week ago. ![]() |
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Hannah | Posted: Dec 27 2008, 05:40 AM | ||
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.....Ooooh... I think me likeys.. <3 But... in Japan?? *grin* This is going.. to be EPIC. | ||
Meteor | Posted: Dec 27 2008, 08:32 AM |
Were you expecting something else? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Advanced Members Posts: 3,921 Member No.: 20,929 Joined: Oct 14th 2006 Location: Some place in South-East Asia ![]() | ^Seconded [GRATUITOUS JAPANESE]SUGOI! KORE WO KUDASAI![/GRATUITOUS JAPANESE] This post has been edited by Meteor on Dec 27 2008, 09:05 AM |
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Meteor | Posted: Mar 8 2009, 02:22 AM |
Were you expecting something else? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Advanced Members Posts: 3,921 Member No.: 20,929 Joined: Oct 14th 2006 Location: Some place in South-East Asia ![]() | That's one nice cover for the next chapter. Did you make it? I sure hope this great story gets updated soon. |
Twister1 | Posted: Mar 12 2009, 05:25 AM |
IDW Member ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 25 Member No.: 32,134 Joined: Mar 11th 2009 Location: Paris ![]() | does not seem as bad history but it is as if something is missing for the rest is perfect |
Hannah | Posted: May 9 2009, 08:03 PM |
Remember Me ![]() Group: PONY FANATIC Posts: 2,243 Member No.: 8,296 Joined: Jun 19th 2005 Location: Update Profile ![]() | I made the cover, actually.. I'd like to do better, but Im still waiting on Drifter to find his muse and his manuscript. ^^;; |
Hannah | Posted: Jun 14 2009, 01:28 PM |
Remember Me ![]() Group: PONY FANATIC Posts: 2,243 Member No.: 8,296 Joined: Jun 19th 2005 Location: Update Profile ![]() | post another chapter!!! omfgggg |
Meteor | Posted: Jun 15 2009, 09:25 AM |
Were you expecting something else? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Advanced Members Posts: 3,921 Member No.: 20,929 Joined: Oct 14th 2006 Location: Some place in South-East Asia ![]() | I was looking forward to a new chapter when I saw a new post in this thread. . . But anyway; sincerely seconded. It's been a long time, and I'd really like to see more chapters. |
kyonpalm | Posted: Mar 18 2010, 12:12 AM | ||
Professional Amateur ![]() Group: ADMINISTRATOR Posts: 10,568 Member No.: 30,882 Joined: Oct 16th 2008 Location: Laniakea ![]() | Perfectly done.[/post] Though I should say more, I guess. This one had me deep into the story as much as On The Unbeaten Path, and had me begging for more by the end. WHY U DO DIS TO US DRIFTA??? Anyway, the writing followed the feel of Initial D surprisingly well, considering how distant it was in other stories such as Unbeaten Path. Just another amazing story that I could never put down, so to speak. Also this made me LOL:
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Hannah | Posted: Mar 18 2010, 12:54 PM |
Remember Me ![]() Group: PONY FANATIC Posts: 2,243 Member No.: 8,296 Joined: Jun 19th 2005 Location: Update Profile ![]() | ....OH MY GODDDDDDDDDDDD YOU MOTHERFU--- AUUUGHHH!!! I can't even remember when I drew that damned chapter illustration!! Drifter, you jerk!! POST ANOTHER CHAPTER, YOU ASS!!! T_T |
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Hannah | Posted: Nov 11 2010, 06:44 AM |
Remember Me ![]() Group: PONY FANATIC Posts: 2,243 Member No.: 8,296 Joined: Jun 19th 2005 Location: Update Profile ![]() | Well, not to bash on the proofreader, but I spy 1 typo and 1 grammar error. ![]() Now, on to the story - Hai!Book? Tougeville?! I ROFFLED SO HARD XD XD XD Well, I guess it's the next step up to playing Solitaire or MaJongg. ![]() All in all, it was well written and a very nice surprise for having waited OVER A YEAR FOR ONE STINKIN' CHAPTER. I enjoyed it, a good read. Wanna know more about the mystery behind the 86, I like the new character Miyuki [although I definitely want to draw a ver.2 to that horrendous-looking chapter art. ugh!] and lolPrius. Just lol. XD |
Nomake Wan | Posted: Nov 11 2010, 12:24 PM | ||
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CBF re-reading the whole thing, where are they? ![]() EDIT: Nevermind, got it. Argh, right at the end. Balls. This post has been edited by Nomake Wan on Nov 11 2010, 01:28 PM | ||
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Hannah | Posted: Nov 11 2010, 01:29 PM |
Remember Me ![]() Group: PONY FANATIC Posts: 2,243 Member No.: 8,296 Joined: Jun 19th 2005 Location: Update Profile ![]() | Both at the end, but I already pointed that out over IMs. Drifter will fix it when he gets home. ![]() |
wing_0 | Posted: Nov 11 2010, 03:10 PM |
IDW Expert Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 126 Member No.: 24,095 Joined: Apr 21st 2007 Location: That Poland place ![]() | Woah, it's alive! Nice update, I like the pacing. Miyuki's a pretty interesting character and the way Nakazato acts around her is pretty funny ^^. I don't exactly understand why Miyuki called Nakazato "Takahashi" and why he didn't react to that ![]() ![]() |
Bumpercam | Posted: Nov 11 2010, 05:18 PM |
Rage Against The Light ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 470 Member No.: 36,515 Joined: Oct 26th 2010 Location: Jakarta, ID ![]() | Uh... I recall reading this in ffn.net for awhile. The name 'Suzaki' kept grating into my nerves, so I went on and read other fics. Other than that one thing, it's actually pretty good. Better than all those high school AUs. Keep it coming! |
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