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> (FANFIC) Natsuki Mogi + Team ORANGE, Chapter 4 is now up!
twitchykun
  Posted: Jul 24 2008, 03:31 PM


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Chapter 1: I'd take the helmet over the race queen outfit any day.

Hm.....it's a little too early. 6:30? Ugh...I haven't had to wake up this early since college. Takumi? Where is he? I rolled over onto my other side, and sure enough there he was. Takumi-kun is so cute when he's asleep. I think I'll just let him sleep a little longer.

"Morning, Natsuki." Takumi kissed me on the forehead. He may be cute, but morning breath is a b*tch.

"Hi sweetie. I have to meet up with Koyama-san. We're going to be doing some testing with our new Legacy STi."

"Subarus...man, is everyone in my family trying to kill me or what?" Takumi mumbled. "First my dad, now you."

"Now now, don't get jealous. You know I still think your trueno is cute. Just like you."

"Hehe, okay Natsuki. I'm going back to bed. I'm probably going to meet up with the guys down at the gas station. Wanna meet up later?"

"Um...sure! I haven't seen Iketani-sempai and Itsuki-kun in ages. I bet they'll like my Legacy!"

Oh! Hello. My name is Natsuki Mogi. I'm one of the drivers for Team ORANGE, and coincidentally, I'm also employed at JUN Auto works. I was the team captain for Tokyo U's car club, and just recently, I got back together with my old boyfriend, Takumi. You might've heard of him, Project D's downhill ace? Team ARTA's #1 driver? Yep. He's still the same though. Sleepy-eyed and cute.

Since that huge enduro race that took place a year ago, I've been doing the usual. Working, photoshoots, and getting track time in. I picked up a Subaru Legacy STi 402 after saving up some dough. Takumi thinks that I'm nuts, but I feel that the car is just right for me.

You might be wondering how I got into this crazy world of mixed up roads, gasoline, tire smoke, and run-ins with the law. Well, stick around and you just might find out!

-to be continued-


This post has been edited by twitchykun on Aug 3 2008, 07:05 AM
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Posted: Jul 24 2008, 04:17 PM


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LOL at the bad breath.

i see so much potential. biggrin.gif MOAR plz. biggrin.gif
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Posted: Jul 24 2008, 06:53 PM


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MOJIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Err. . MOAR PLZ, because this fic is gonna be good.
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Posted: Jul 24 2008, 07:37 PM


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nice... i was wondering where you would go since the SOS-Dan arc pretty much ended with that last fic...

very unique idea, props.
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  Posted: Jul 26 2008, 07:55 PM


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Chapter 2: My first meeting with Susumu Koyama and....him.

So anyway, there I was. I just had my first few semester at Tokyo U, and I joined the auto club. There were a few other people that joined along with me. Kaname, Naru, and Kyoko were my race-mates back then. Come to think of it, that was how I met my future racing team.

-Tokyo University - Automotive Science Department - Shop-

"So Natsuki, what's going on with you and Takumi these days?" Kaname said, her arm wrapped around her boyfriend.

"Nothing really. He's doing his Project.D thing, and I'm well....here." The only reason that I joined this club was to get closer to Takumi, to learn why he does what he does. Truth be told, I was starting to forget why I joined in the first place. Hanging out with these girls was a refreshing way to get adjusted to this new school.

"Hm...there is this one thing that Kei-kun kept telling me. 'If we enter Todai together, we'll find happiness for sure.' I'm not sure if it was Todai or not, but I'm happy that he's here, even though he's an accidental pervert." Naru stated.

"Natsuki-chan, read this!" Kyoko came running into the hall waving a paper around. Clad in a jumpsuit, Kyoko was one of those girls that was more at home greased up and tooling up her FD. "JUN Auto is having a model search for the next umbrella girls! You should totally go for it!" Wait, why the hell was Kyoko telling me this?

"Kyoko...why?" I was at a loss for words. "You girls are prettier than lil'ol' me, you oughta go."

"I can't do it. Kei-kun can barely take his eyes off me, I'd hate to see what he'd do if he saw me wearing one of those race-queen outfits. He'd probably bust a load in his--" Naru got cut off by her boyfriend, Keitaro.

"Smooooch" Keitaro went in for the kiss. I find it hard to believe that he wasn't always this smooth.

"You dork." Naru hugged Keitaro.

"And I can't do it either....Sosuke would probably kill someone."

"I wouldn't kill them, Chidori. I'd only incapacitate them to prevent them from approaching---"

*THWACK*

Ah, the paper fan. Accurate as always. Well, that only left me. So with their "approval", I went down to the JUN Auto Works Tokyo Office.

-Jun Auto Works, Tokyo branch-

"Tarzan, are you sure about this? The next girl that walks in through the door will be your protege?"

"Damnit Koyama, I'm sure. I knew things were gonna turn out good the moment I started passing out those flyers. We're gonna get some cutie, and turn her into the most awesome street racing female ever! That or we'll find some cute umbrella girls." Tarzan paused and pulled out a cigarette. Koyama promptly snatched it from him.

"Hey, what gives?"

"This is a non-smoking area."

I was led into the Jun Auto Works office by the secretary there, and I knocked on the door to Koyama-san's office.

"Come in, door's open!"

"I'm sorry for intruding...my name is Natsuki Mo--"

"WELCOME TO JUN-AU--"

A shadowy figure jumped at me, and I did what any normal japanese girl would do. I got him in a ippon-seo-nagi throw, and chucked him across the room. The figure crashed into Koyama-san's trophy collection. The guy looked like your standard bozozoku, bleached hair, crazy sunglasses, and a Team Orange racing suit. What happened next surprised me.

"Haha, I like you already. Welcome to Team Orange!" Koyama enthusastically said. "Tarzan, what do you think about her?"

"If my spleen wasn't bleeding, I think i'd be ecstatic."

"Soo...what will I be wearing to these functions?"

"Umbrella girl? Natsuki-chan, I think not. You've got the makings of a legendary racer! Try this on!" Koyama-san tossed me a Team Orange suit.

"Sorry about before. Name's Tarzan Yamada. And starting now, you're gonna be my apprentice!" Tarzan quickly picked himself up, despite bleeding from various orifices. "Natsuki, we're gonna rule the world!"

Shit. Just what the hell did I get myself into?

-to be continued-
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Posted: Jul 26 2008, 08:54 PM


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The epicness continues. .

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Posted: Jul 26 2008, 09:11 PM


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I'm a little bit lost here. But it's good material!
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Posted: Jul 28 2008, 06:40 AM


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nice... some of takumis luck must have rubbed off on her to have come across an opportunity like that, hah!

great job, keep em comin
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  Posted: Jul 29 2008, 04:20 PM


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Chapter 3: The family business.

I eventually made it back down to sleepy little Haruna. The traffic was still rather light, as it was the middle of the day. The first thing that I decided to do was visit my future father-in-law.

"Dad, are you home?" I entered the tofu shop. The smell of ganmodoki still lingered in the air. Makes sense, this IS a tofu shop after all.

"Oh, Natsuki. Hello." Dad puffed a cigarette, which I promptly snatched from him.

"I thought we told you to stop smoking, dad."

"Meh. You two can't watch me all the time." He grinned a little bit, then gave me a hug. "So, I thought you two would be visiting later this week?"

"Nah, my team is out in America for some drifting event."

"Hm....that's perfect. I trust Tarzan has been keeping you busy?"

"You have no idea."

"Well, not busy enough, if you had to come and check on little old me. Natsuki, I've got a favor to ask of you..."

Oh great. I can already tell what it is. It involves a glass of water and tofu in the trunk.

"Here." Dad handed me a glass of water.

"Awwwwwwwwwww....now?" I interjected.

"Yep. I'll let you drive my Subaru. No wait...you drove, right?"

"Um.....no." Please don't look in the back, please don't look in the back...

"Aha! A Subaru Legacy STi 420R. Natsuki-chan, can you deliver some tofu for me? My back's been killing me, and my lazy son hasn't come home to help be out....cough....cough....", Dad's a lousy liar.

"Okay, I'll go!"

"Here." He handed me another cup of water.

"Natsuki, we've been through this before. Steady with everything. Make sure you distribute the weight evenly."

I hopped into my Legacy, placed the cup of water in the cupholder, and took off.

"Maaaaaan, I knew I should've visited the guys first!"

With that, I was headed up Mt.Akina to deliver some tofu...

-to be continued-
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Watch out! Natsuki knows toh-fu!

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  Posted: Aug 3 2008, 07:04 AM


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Chapter 4: Itsuki still can't drive.

So here I am, on Akina Mountain. This is a place of significance for Takumi and myself, 'cuz a whole bunch of stuff happened between us here. And here I am delivering tofu for my future father-in-law. Hm....looks like it's one of the speedstars. AE85....Itsuki. Let's play with you for a little bit, I can afford to push it just a little.

I caught up to Itsuki-kun on those last straights before the 5 hairpins.

"Whoa! Who's chasing me?! Black Subaru Legacy?! Well, whoever they are, they're not gonna defeat one of the speedstars! AE85 TURBO POWER GO!!!!" Itsuki screamed. Despite his enthusiasm, he wasn't getting far.

I dove into the corner, hooking my tires into the gutter. The tires squealed just a bit, but this enabled me to keep my speed up, and allowed me a fast corner exit speed. Itsuki washed out and wound up in the dirt.

"Whoa....that line is just like Takumi's. I wonder if he's going up to the hotel too?"

"Sorry Itsuki, you were just a little too slow. At least I got some revs outta my bad boy."

I continued crawling up Akina mountain with that trunkful of tofu in the back. Rather uneventful, I must say. At least the scenery was beautiful, like always. I passed by the ice-skate rink, the hidden temple, the staging area where all the races began, and eventually, I made it to Akina lake.

And wouldn't you know it, the Speedstars were having a meet there. For some reason, I decided to wear my helmet, so my face wasn't readily visible. I carried the tofu to the hotel kitchen receiving area, where the cooks were waiting for me.

"Ah! You're delivering the tofu for Bunta-san?"

"Yeah...just for a bit, anyway."

"Hehe, Natsuki-chan, Bunta's only doin' this 'cuz he acknowledges your skill. And wouldn't you know it, it's intact. A little rough around the edges....did you get into a little tussle on the way up?"

"You might say that. Well, I'm gonna go hang with those guys over there."

I walked over to the Speedstars gathering, and it looked like Itsuki had finally caught up to the group.

"Sempai! There was this awesome black Subaru Legacy STi that drives just like Takumi does! It took those hairpins just like he does! There it is!"

I calmly walked over to their gathering, and for some reason, everybody tensed up. It seemed like everyone was sizing me up, trying to figure out just how good I was. I took off my helmet, and said....

"Awww..Itsuki-kun, you couldn't have been talking about little old me, now would you?" I winked at the guys.

"NATSUKI-CHAN!" The guys all ran up and gave me a big hug.

This night is gonna get crazy, that's for sure!

-to be continued-
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Posted: Aug 3 2008, 06:25 PM


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This is really good stuff! Keep it up man! Definately faving this! biggrin.gif
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Posted: Aug 5 2008, 09:34 AM


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This is getting better with each update

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lil bit of a thread revival here guys sorry but what happened to this it had promise? it was sounding like a good'un
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Good stuff !!!! Great writing twitchykun sing.gif
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  Posted: Mar 11 2010, 07:11 PM


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Chapter 5: The good ol' boys.

"Oi oi Natsuki! Since when did you start driving?"

"Iketani-senpai, I started driving for Team ORANGE after I got out of Todai. Did you ever make up with Mako-senpai?"

The mere mention of Mako-senpai made Iketani crumple like a papier-mache vase filled with water. I suppose I got my answer.

"Natsuki, you still can't mention Mako's name around Iketani. He still...."

"Right right, he crumples. Okay loverboy, get in your car, we're going to Karuizawa. RIGHT NOW."

"Eeeehhh? Natsuki?" Iketani interjected, his eyes dewy with tears.

"My sweetie's out right now, but I can tell him to meet us out there. 'sides, there's some things I wanna try out there on that Usui mountain pass."

I then called Takumi, letting him know where we were going.

"Hon, be careful out there, okay? I know you're REALLLLY good and stuff now, but still...I worry."

"Love ya! I'll be good." I hung up the phone and rejoined the team.

Kenji-senpai said to me, "You and Takumi really are like a married couple now. It's so sweet!"

"Time for you to find someone too Kenji-senpai! That's why we're going to Karuizawa."

I hopped into my Legacy and the 4 of us thundered down Akina....well, 2 of us did.

"Iketani! The 180 won't start!"

"Lemme get the jumper cables!"

This is like a bad episode of Top Gear....

to be continued
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Posted: Mar 14 2010, 03:18 AM


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QUOTE (twitchykun @ Mar 11 2010, 07:11 PM)
"Iketani! The 180 won't start!"

"Lemme get the jumper cables!"

This is like a bad episode of Top Gear....

to be continued


This made me laugh so hard!

Man after such a long hiatus. It's good to have some fanfics coming back. I particularly liked this one too! Well done. smile.gif Keep it up!

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Posted: Mar 19 2010, 07:11 PM


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whoa... thats a longgg break twitchykun

still as good as ever~!