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> [FANFIC]Razor's Edge, RX8 Awakend
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  Posted: May 9 2008, 04:57 PM


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Chapter One : A New Begining

"So its settled? Razor Edge Racer is the teams name then?" ben said with a hint of impatience in his voice.

"I dont really care, as long as we become the fastest around here, my questions is, what about your car?" Robin asked his newly made friend,

"Dont you worry, i own a tuning company, i have enough money to get the perfect car for my style." ben said with a wide grin on his face.

----------- 4 days Later ---------

"SIR!SIR!!! Your car has been deivered to the shop, would you like to see it?" the delevery man said with an fake tone of excitement.

"sure, just drive me there, ill take her on a test drive tonight." ben almost screamed with glee.

when the the white delevery truck arrived at the front of a large building, the front said, " Wangan Tuners LTD " a dark purplish RX-8 was sitting out infront with a man standing beside it, he was wearing a black jacket with blue jeans, he look erely familiar from a distance, but ben was to excited to noticed until he got up close to see his new car.

" huh..?" ben said surprised with his eyes wide, robin was standing next to the car, grinning evily at him.

" hehe, you did'nt think i knew were you worked did you? when your silvia crashed, i saw the logo on the rear quater window, i decided to visit, and i swa this little beuty write after i arrived." patting the hood with his hand.

" well that didnt surprise me one bit, though after months of researching, i found two cars that were perfect for me, a Mazda RX-8, and a 2002 Firebird WS6, i decided on this since i wanted to see what lightweight would do for mountain racing. " ben said trying to sound smart.

"well, your car has a high revving engine, which is good, because you can increase your revs in corners, you can go abit faster and your gears can be shorter. but i dont think you have ever driven anything less than 3300 pounds."

"well im going to use my job here as the engineer, and engine tuning specialist to get the engine prepared for the mountain, but i may need help with the suspension. "

"well then, i might help you, bring her over tonight and we'll test out different settings."

Later that night, ben was experimenting new techniques going uphill on akina, he heard the rumble of an old V8 roaring up behind him,

"hmm, i wonder who that could be, looks alot like max's car, wait a sec.. that IS his car! bunta should be done with it by now, i bet he's testing it out."

A large old charger was rumbling up akina'a pass at breathtaking speeds, with bunta behind the wheel testing out the new settings, "hmmm not bad, still is to heavy and large for these roads, he wont have to worry about getting apssed anywhere but akagi."

A loud sucking noise was coming from the old charger,

"hmm, sounds likes ITB's, but on an old thing like that? ill outrun him easily on the upill, he isnt driving the 86 this time." ben said with almost the same evil grin as robin, pressing the gas, he was shocked by the torque lag from the small rotory, "im defintly getting a 20b in this thing" he said as the power really kicked in and he was going uphill at almost as reckless speed as bunta. it was only a few corners till the tofu shop, but the purple rx-8 was gripping the turns as good as the fresh tires could take it, but the old charger passed him on the srtaight away before the tofu shop and parked in the parking lot. "You still got it bunta, even with a big ol' american car like that, how much longer till your done tuning anyway?' ben asked with a spark of curiosity in his mind

"oh... about 2 days" bunta siad lighting up another cigerette.

"you should really stop smoking bunta, those things can kill you."

Bunta just puffed another poof of smoke and got the tofu bins back in the car and drove off, a few minutes later a different engine roar could be heard, robins supra was drifting uphill, and he stopped right next to bens new RX-8.

"well after about 4 hourse tuning, i have to get some sleep, so we dont have to much time." he said with sarcasm flying out of his mouth.

"well we just started the team, ill be making the logo tommorow, also im taking you for a lil' ride on the wangan, dont poop your pants." ben said grinning as wide as he could.

This post has been edited by .M. on May 18 2008, 12:21 PM
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yay my car can go well on these mountains finally
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  Posted: May 14 2008, 02:21 PM


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Zen's Chapter ^.^

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Chapter 2 : Z vs Zen

The Night Kids were gathering at Myogi’s summit. Tonight, the mount was hosting an internal race of his main team. Once again, the rivalry between Shingo Shoji and Takeshi Nakazato would make them race on Myogi. They have raced against each other in very different areas : Akagi, Usui, Shomaru, and indirectly on Akina against the 86. Takeshi was alawys first with his black Skyline R32, but Shingo almost won on Shomaru, where he almost made Nakazato spin. However, with his ATTESA ETS system, he managed to get back on his four wheels, and to win the race. They lined up, revving their engines.

Takeshi Nakazato: “Shingo, you should stop trying to beat me everywhere… The only mountain pass you ever could beat me on is the one in your dreams!”
Shingo Shoji: “Be careful with your fat ass 32, it might end up in the deep valley…”
Takeshi Nakazato: “Tomo, start the countdown!”
Tomo: “5, 4, 3, 2…” The walkie-talkie bipped.
Walkie-Talkie: “Wait wait, there are two cars that are going uphill at an impressive speed… Wait wait, they seem to battle each other… They did a twin drift! These guys are impressive!”
Takeshi Nakazato: “Give me the Walkie… What cars did they drive?”
Walkie: “There was an old Supra mkII, it was black, and also a purplish RX-8”.
Takeshi Nakazato: “We will wait until they are up there… I don’t want two precks to interrupt the way I wll teach Shingo he’s slow!”

After some minutes, two pairs of headlights arrived slowly each in his lane, and parked in the paking area, so as not to block the road. A caucasian and an afro-american guy got out respectively of the Supra and the RX-8. The white guy started talking.
Zen : “We are Zen and Ben, from the Razor’s Edge Racers. We are foreigners, and we come to challenge the best drivers of each pass. We are looking for Takeshi Nakazato of the Night Kids, is he there?”.
Takeshi Nakazato: “I am Nakazato. But I won’t race against you! We don’t know how good you are, and I’m quite pissed that you interrupted my race. Tomo, would you race them? (a guy nodded). It’s settled then, one of you is going to race against Tomo, the third best of the Night Kids, and his Fairlady 350Z. But you two guys will be going after I finish with Shingo!”
The coutdown started again, and the race against the two big bosses of Myogi began. Nakazato took the lead, using his power. The positions kept that way for while, and everybody shivered when Shingo took the lead with a gently push when he was passing Nakazato. But Nakazato won by slingshooting Shingo at the very last corner, using the same feint pass that Takumi used against him.
Zen: “Ben, I will do this one. The tuning of your RX-8 isn’t fully finished, and you might not be used enough to driving it to do very good times. I’ll go against him.”
Ben: “Have you seen his car? It is very wide, and with such aero he’ll be gripping the corners.”
Zen: “That means that he must have a big turbo with a lot of lag, so I know how I can make my move if I can follow him. I just need to figure when I should do it”.

The Supra lined up with the 350Z. He didn’t speak with Tomo, as the latter was certain of his victory. The countdown arrived to 0, and they both launched without smoke. Zen was inside for the first 90 corner to the right, so he took the lead. Myogi’s downhill is weird, because you have a downhill part with low inclination, then quite a steep uphill part, and finally a steep downhill until the finish line.
As Zen thought, Tomo would grip his 350Z, that’s why he made the rear track longer and added aerodynamic shaped front fender and rear spoiler. As planned, Tomo sacrified his corner entries in order to benefit plently of his excessively huge turbo in corner exits. He had about 460 horsepower, when looking at his acceleration.

The two cars arrived at the uphill part. Zen started gripping, for if would be slower to drift here because of the uphill understeer. After each corner, the 350Z was closing the gap. They arrived to the famous long uphill corner to the left. They both entered it bumper to bumper. They got close to the inside, and suddenly Zen went to the outside while mid corner. Tomo was quite surprised of how Zen did that, because he wasn’t drifting, nor changed his steering. Tomo took the occasion to pass him.

The black Supra driver smiled. When Tomo finished passing him, the Supra engine revved a little more faster than usual.
Zen: *How the hell… I see… This can be very useful*.
He got back in the best line. Just after was a U-Turn to the right. Tomo entered it while heel-toeing, and Zen did the same.
Tomo: *How can he corner that fast… When I was watching him from behind, he was going all out as well as now but he seems to be faster…*
Zen eventually touched Tomo’s rear bumper.

After the hairpin they arrived at the downhill part again. There was some midspeed corners. Tomo had never managed to get a good line in this S part because his accelerator work wasn’t that good. Plus as he changed the turbo recently, he couldn’t manage it very nicely. So he thought that Zen would take a better line and pass him in the third one. But, surprisingly, he sticked to Tomo’s rear bumper.
Tomo: *You’re idiot, you should have passed me! We’re now at the long straight, I will leave you there!*
He pushed the pedal to the metal. But, weirdly, the gap between Zen and him did increase, but not as much as he had thought. It was as if the Supra just had 50 horsepower less. They were at the end of the long straight. Before braking, Tomo saw that Zen started drifting with a very high angle, but he kept staying at the same distance of him.
Tomo: “This is nonsense!!!”
He braked to enter the fast corner to the right. Zen deported himself to the interior before Tomo would, and drifted the whole corner. Tomo, whose line had been messed, took the corner at 75% of his nice speed. Zen was 30 meters in front of him. Zen took the corner that led them in the forest. Tomo took it, and he could see Zen taking the other corners. When Tomo arrived finished cornering this one, he couldn’t see Zen anymore.

___

At the start line, Ben received a phone call.
Ben: “Oh it’s you… You won? Obivously it was easy… You won by twelve seconds? Good, yeah I’m going down soon.”
When they heard it, Nakazato and Shingo shivered. They whispered:
Nakazato: “This is impressive… my hotlap is fourteen seconds faster than Tomo…’
Shingo: “Mine is thirteen and a half…”
Nakazato (he stopped whispering): “Hey, RX-8 driver! I am willing to race against you guys.”
Shingo: “No, I will race against them first”
Ben: “Why not we race all four together? It would be a relay race. Zen and you with the long hair (pointing at Shingo), you ‘ll start going downhill, then once either Zen or you arrives down, his team mate starts going up.”
Nakazato & Shingo: “That sounds interesting. Is tomorrow okay?”
Ben: “I’m sorry, we have a very fillen up schedule, we will be in Usui, and we go for a run in the Saitama district the next days. So maybe should we say in 10 days ?”
Nakazato: “Alright, but don’t expect too much to win. Tonight you only proved that you deserved racing against us.”
Ben (getting in his RX-8): “I have no doubt about that will be a close race…”
And he left downhill
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Posted: May 16 2008, 04:19 PM


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ewwwww rx8 lol


good chapter
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  Posted: May 18 2008, 12:20 PM


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Chapter Three - Mazda Awakend



“ Who is it?” Robin asked turning around to see a familiar pink Silvia resting in the parking spot, Ben walking toward him, “Oh hey Ben, you got the Silvia fixed I see, why did you bring it here? Isn’t you’re RX-8 for the mountain races? “ Robin asked peeking over at the Pink Silvia. “ Well it was originally planned for the Wangan scene, I was planning to try out the new engine settings, just came by to see if you wanted a ride on the highway. “ Ben said with a grin on his face. “ Hmm, well considering the power you had on the mountain, I think you’ll be invincible on wangan, sure I’ll come along. “ Robin said while trying to get the shoe on his left foot on properly.
• 5 Minutes Later *
“ Whoa! “ Robin blurted as the ferocious V8 slammed him into the seat, superchargers wailing, shoving boost down the throat of the monster engine, “Hold on robin, I’m going full throttle. “ Ben said glaring at the road then stepping on it, the rear tire lit up from the power, even at over 100 MPH, “Holy Crap! This thing has god like power. “ Robin thought to himself, watching the digital speedo going past 190 Miles per hour in a breeze, he quickly looked at Ben, who’s hand moved to the gear shifter and quickly shifted into 6th, waiting a second before slamming the gas again. “ Robin we have some company. “
6 Headlights were quickly pulling up behind the Silvia, and just as quickly passed him while he let off the gas. “ A Blue S30, A black Turbo, and a White R32? “ Ben said puzzled by the group who was clearly racing, “ Lets crash their party “ Ben said before robin even had time to object, the rear end swung out slightly thanks to the power. “ Who is that guy in the pink Silvia ? “ Tatsuya wondered to himself, as the pink spec grew quickly into an engine roar and then was on his tail, neither flashing lights or attempting to pass, “ Hmm we got another one. “ Reina thought to herself quickly pushing the gas as far as it would go, the R32 let out a pop and rocketed toward the blue Z, which was leading until a very large roar was heard combined with tire shrieks and smoke, A pink Silvia passed them with ease, flying off into the distance.

“ That was insane! “ Robin barely breathed, still amazed at the speed the little pink car possessed. “ It was nothing, I don’t race wangan cause, well its to easy now, and some characters are very suspicious . “ Ben said pulling up into shop, the lights in the garage still on, “Why are were here? “ Robin asked, seeing the purple RX-8 on stands and with suspension parts, an engine hoist, and a shiny new 20B Rotary in the corner, waiting to be installed. “ Well were going to finish the suspension, and the install the engine, I have all the harnesses and the transmission ready, we just have to put it in and hook it up, then we’ll go for a test drive. “ Ben said eyes staring intently at the purple RX-8 .

*7 Hours Later*

“ Alright robin give me the keys, I want to start her up myself! “ Ben said running and almost knocking over robin in a frenzy to get to his newly tuned car sitting on the ground, “ whoa, slow down there partner. “ Robin said in a fake country accent, getting in the RX-8 and strapping in the race harness, the 20B started with a screaming wail, scaring ben and robin speechless for a few seconds before they came back from shock, “ It’s like I can feel the power . “ Ben said in a voice sounding like an amazed little kid, the car woke from its sleep and was shifted in 1st, they drove to Akagi for a few test runs. “ The anti-roll bars are to stiff ben, you cant use weight transfer effectively. “ Robin told his friend who was only focusing on the road, going uphill at reckless speeds. “ Let me drive Ben. “ Robin asked hand out for the keys, “ okay, but don’t hurt my new baby. “ Ben said worryingly handing over the keys to robin, he screamed downhill at high speed, drifting around turns using lines Ben hadn’t even thought of using till he saw robin drive his newly tuned Mazda, “ Robin my car revs a lot higher than yours, I haven’t touched the engine yet, but this N/A Version should be making 300HP, but thanks to the lightweight parts that came with it, I guess I can rev to about 10,000 RPMS. “ Ben instructed while looking at the tachometer, which never seemed to drop below 8,000. After a few more runs, they decided to call it a night. “ Alright robin, be ready for Usui in that black supra of yours. “ Ben said pointing at him and the car in the driveway, then he drove back to his apartment, waiting for the teams first official battle.
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Impact! Part 1

Chapter 3.5


After thier little highway run, Ben decided to drive the monstorously powerful S15 to Usui to get a look at the road and the rythum of it. "Beautiful 'aint it Robin?"
"Sure.... But whats more beautiful is that Sil-Eighty streaking right past us! Look at that drift, perfection, all 4 wheels sliding!

"There is a car sitting slightly in the road, grip this corner on the outside line"
"Right" years of having Sayuki meant she could unconciously listen and perform the instructions given, braking slight later and gripping the turn, Mako used the understeer to avoid a unusually pink car with two men standing glaring at the car like Ryosuke.

"Robin, she hit the brakes, i think they are turning around to come greet us to Usui pass" Ben said with a wink, Robin rolling his eyes, was surprised to see the car already parked with two pretty japanese women walking right towards them.